Hula and Washka's joint project thread (warning, some gore and nudity involved)

[aby arty]

smthng with more action and interactions will be fit for the graphic novel.

heres what washka ordered( umm but shouln't the doc order?)

thanks washka. glad you liked it .

about the two warriors training , that will be like goku and vegeta training in hyperbolic time chamber , hmm but its a great idea none the less.
who will break the spell from outside? me? aaw gosh u made me blush.

well ill continue with the first revelation :

on that night i sneaked out of the acdemy , i had stuck coconut hair on myself to disgiuse as a wild beaver or smthng.

it was hard to sneak past AV sensei but i manged it, he was the main reason why didnot teleport, he can tell who went , where ,why,and when, all by looking at the magic residue.sheesh !! why teachers have to be geniuses.

i did not fly i just walked like a beaver , when iwas safely away from haven's perimeter, i hoped a lil.i could not take to the sky as the watchtowers may see me.

i reached the marsh after 3 hours,there in the centre , it appeared the black thing spread all over was actually covering a crater in the centre.

the terrain was kinda resculpted the area other than black was scorched red , u dnt see all this from the sky.

i had seen the picture of then green valley, in AV sensei's book , this sight was heart aching.

the gases started tickling my nose and i sneezed , i was scared that some unknown horror may track me now.

the black began thumping , and so did my heart , i was sweating like hell , the black called out whos there, i rattled , can you free me,it said?

i gathered courage but still squeaked , what if ur the ultimate doom ? what if u make me black too , i am very scared , please stop thumping.

oh sorry , dont worry iam good , tell me whats the sight outsde i will tell you how to take me out.

but who are you ? why ar u here ? why cant you get out? and who prisoned u here?

I am freespace. someone imprisoned me here , idont know his motive but i think he trying to kill me.

Ffffrrre..... freespace? the god of time and space? omg are u serious?

yes. indeed. how do you know me kid? iam way old then ur time.

AV sensei taught me about you. u were in the battle with 7 hearts, in which we lost are founders.

Your founders arent dead , they are captive , the enemy plans to use them to create the weapon to kill me , he wants to rule time.

wish i knew who it was.

who is av sensei?

hes the archmage elven prince Avatar.


oh well i hope that avatars student will not dissapoint , break the magic from outside son.


umm the greeanvalley is scorched red , mountains are cracked, and this black soot is rock hard . what should i do.

about a lil faraway to northeast theres an ancient leprechaun establishment , find diamonds or an even harder stuff and start breaking the black.

wont any magic do good ? i asked.

umm not largely , but u can try. well i think ill go find diamonds.

i will return shortly.

after an hour or so i returned with lots of diamonds and strange metals.

he guided me to use few spells and make tools out of them , after hours of hardwork,
i had made a diamondhead hammer.

i started whacking it, i used superspeed spell to finish it of quickly. but it still took 80 minutes.

a mauve flower of energy rose out of the crater, and from it revealed itself , a shiny black being, whose body showed the universe.

sure it was god of time and space , freespace.


he looke around and was saddened by the sight of green valley, what usay we reinstate green valley young dragon.

after u sir, what can i do?

do u have rejuvination spell.

ya its 30% efficient.

fine use it ill make it 300% efficient.

we combined are spells and the magic began restoring the ever beatiful green valley.

what will i say when i return back? iaam worried. dont worry. u wont be in trouble.

he opened up a vision portal and every one was busy prepairing for some long travel, with dean sage.

they havent noticed yet, wanna stay with me for a while?

ooo sure , can u teach me basics of being time dragon

ur half dragon , it may be very risky , please i wanna try iam a mage too.

ok we will stop by time dragons academy. but only a walkthru ok?

excellent. can we eat something first?

sure. the green valley was restored , and we flew far northeast to farmlands and had a feasty meal.

farm owner was astonished to see a veg dragon , i digged in on pumkins and water melons.

freespace ate apples and almonds.

meanwhile back at academy , before leaving for the urgent assignment AV waved and twitched his fngers and cast a spell , 2 brightlights wildly began searching the area.

and AV sat in the carriage.

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more after lunch

[washka]

Ok so, now we need some end to da story. Hope you'll finish it after lunch aby.
I'm waiting yours too hula, don't consider the style for it, you can just make an end.

Then I've got something hard waiting for you/us.
You'll see, it's a surprise, but don't worry, it's part of the work.

Here's mine (end):
So magical mess and mages/gods's battle bring chaos.
Chaos bring change, killing, big despair and drama but some tiny hope.
So after all da big drama trouble that erased his existence, the tiny hope reveal itself to the new hero.
(He wasn't hero before da big trouble)
This hope is fragile, so the new hero's got a new quest. He has to face strong opponents and big problems, but he achieves to bring da hope where it needs to be.
Then da evil guys kill da good hero and the hope get smashed, and that bring thousands years of war and despair into da world. (Surprise there) The bad ones win.

I bet that's some end you won't have predicted?

No it's just a funky idea, I'll try to get another one better.

For fun:

[hulahuga]

He comes back to the prior's grave, picks up the body and buries him in holy ground...

There we have it . Frigging terrific ending if you ask me..



Aby the baby dragon - Ey man! I actually answered the former one with a couple of HAs ... You got some hilarious ideas there... Will it continue with me making a huge explosion in the basement??? :P

[washka]

Hmm... Seems your end is as bad as mine Hula.
Let's see what's got aby, it has been 5 hours he's at lunch...
He's eating more than a dragon.

[hulahuga]

I actually thought of it as a good ending... (probably explained it badly)

When he has tried for months to survive a countryside in upheaval as well as plenty of hunts for heretics with the boy he finally goes back to the fallen prior who died for the sake of the innocent. He then either digs up the body and puts it in holy ground (or whatever you call it= a Christian graveyard) or anoints the ground around him, finally saying a silent prayer and wanders off with the boy in hand...

[washka]

It's some "sad" ending, but it fit to the story you've told.
There could be some obstacle before he puts the holy man in da ground?
Like trying to get out of the city with the corpse (if it's months later, it's something more like a skeletton that he'll carry)...
Deadly mobs and guards walking around...

[hulahuga]

Hmm well perhaps.. If we want to we can give it some conflict but it is a bit more of a finishing scene when everything is done. Almost like an epilogue or at least a definitive end. The quarrels are over and the first thing he does is turning to his old friend, making sure his body and soul can be safely kept...

[washka]

Wanted to illustrate what I mean:

[hulahuga]

Hehe...
Well he could have tried to move him after he was hung... But then he was hunted down by the bishop's/inquisition's men... And THEN when everything was truly over he succeeded...

[aby arty]

hula ur church story is reminding of david edding's Elenium trilogy .
so w'll have to rip it and restitch it here and there. and i am glad my ideas make u laugh.

and lol waska iam not in the feeding grounds i came back and did write a lot but bfr i could post the power was gone so i took a nap and woke up late. and now its too late in the night so i am going to bed ill wrap it up after ur feedback in the morning.

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story continues....

Everyone had just reached the witch town of Yagadale, they were taken to town hal and were attended wth utmost care.

the headwitch entered the room with slew of attendents, she gestured the guests to follow here to the conference room.

when their eyes met , they shared frozen expressions,both dean and head witch loathed each other. as it is with all people from different magic factions.

the conference room , was an ominous arched room, wth a large circular stone table in centre, its seating capacity was 14.

the lighting was the courtsey of the glow worms and light pixies, there was another door to the east which opened into the auditorium, where sound demons were being trained how to aide vocal presentations.(then times sanheiser?)

after evryone had settled down, the head witch spoke, I whole heartedly welcome or guests from AOMS , since the matter is urgent ill begin right away, for the past 20 days our sister witches have been dissapearing one by one, and we couldnt do any thing.
We fear that if the enemy has his eyes set on our settlement he must be after ....
we all know that. Sage rich ur father gave us the lands , u must be knowing how to protect the power within.

yes i do know, but why did u call us here, is it something connected to us or the acdemy?

i asked my crystal ball who will releave us, it showed me the academy , the marshes, and the lil kid half dragon.

Avatars eyes widened , Dean sage was also taken aback. thats not possible a baby halfling fighting unknown horrors , doesnt go down well with me i cannot allow that.
maybe ur toy is inaccurate.

the crystal ball raged. Dum witted sage dont challenge destiny , and u call me a piece of amusement again ill burn u to cinders.

lol u should have seen sage rich shaking.headwitch calmed the ball,iam sorry about the outrage,please change ur addressal.

its ok i accept my mistake.if its true what do you want from us?

wheres the kid? umm sage said havent seen him this morning he must be at the acdemy only , he looked at avatar.

No sir he sneaked out last night only, i have put tracker bugs after him, they told me that the green valley is cured.

silence filled the room , headwitch's jaw dropped , baby dragon cured green valley? then she started laughing haha oh Sage Rich ur students are lightyears ahead of you.

the sage nodded indeed they are. he Shot a furious glance at AV.

after discussing the matter a lil while , they all left the conference room , and as they left the magic pocket in the coner of the room diminshed as its purpose was served.

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meanwhile , somewhere in some other dimension in space , at the Time Dragons Academy
, Freespace and I had just landed, jumping through space gates churns ur stomach a lot.

though Freespace kept informing me , about what galaxy we were in how many planets are there, whats on the planets we pass by, what type of races live on them,and what type of work they do, what branch magic are they accustomed to, and how social they are.

as we reached TDA , we were kinda exhausted, Freespace surely had some business here , owise he wouldnt have agreed to bring me here. (never doubt a dragon's intelligence u know. and that too an archmage's student)


He went on to meet the TDA dean , he was a half dragon too, everyone feared him, there hadnt been greater time dragon, except the 7 hearts.


he left me in a instructor's supervision, who walked me thru basics of being a time dragon.since he wasnt a dragon, i(me) manupulated him easily into telling more than ordered , but i(me) refrained from using any spells.

Meanwhile Freespace and the dean were almost finished, lord what u tell me about the witches is it true, Yes i(FS) had cast a overhear spell in their conference room ,the headwitch was telling Sage rich , that the half dragon is the part of the prophecy.

Should we train him here ? the dean pondered for a moment and then said its for the best. We should begin tomorrow , i(dean) hope his abscence wont be a prblem back there?

Dont worry Sage rich wont question my efforts. And, yes i(FS) would like to train him personally.

please make 5 of your best men ready at my disposal ,said freespace.


Right away !!

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That night Freespace was troubled by a disturbing vision,they will be extracted tommorrow,
all preparations were done.
Freespace's hunch was accurate , it was washka next............

He woke up suddenly ,I came into his dorm, can we start training now , i have a bad feeling that we are highly lagging behind the enemy.
FS stared at me for a while, but nodded in agreement.He did not share his vision with me, but told me to get ready, while he speaks with the dean.

After the half dragon left, Freespace presented himself to Sage rich and AV in their dream and told them to quadruple efforts as washka is imminent danger, and cautioned them to prepare a revival technique ,just in case.

after sending the message he went on to look for the TDA dean, who was training his youngest son, FS found the child very impressive at what he did,he gestured the dean to have a chat.

FS said the half dragon needs to be trained right away , please make the necessary arrangements, danger is imminent, we cant wait.the dean nodded and turned back and clapped his hands two men came running and were given orders, they bowed and hurried out to carry the orders.

Dean's child called father are u done pls come back here.

A lil while more son!ill just be there.

dean turned to FS and said anything else i could help with.

FS said hmmm ya, train ur child well these two should have a battle tomorrow , the dean was wide eyed, are u sure? isnt it too early ? May be the half dragon is up against a greater evil , he needs combat experience, whats better than a time dragon?

and the main reason is to have an edge over 7 hearts if it returns.

The dean nodded as u wish ,ill prepare him for battle.


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We were 5 hrs into the training, and i was already panting, i looked upto FS and said close combat is tiring can we do some stamina building routines?

FS agreed and we began working on my endurance and stamina.

after two hrs of rest , we resumed the real training, the time dragon's special arts, my instructor was none other than the god of time and space, and 5 academy's best instructs were there for assistance.

are training chamber had metal walls , it was a metal from an asteroid only a lil stronger than titanium .

FS said ill showcase my moves then you do the same.

after showcasing freespace taught me Lvl10 teleportation (no spell residue ) and a deceptive technique calle time shuffle.

it was time for the damaging spells, i learned lvl 2 time pulse ( lvl 3 drained me too much and i collapsed 5 times) the size of my attack was 42 times smaller than FS, crazy power he got.seriously.

and finally i learned dimension rip lvl5 , freespace did it wth his eyes but i started to have a headache , so i concentrated the energy into my claws instead.it was the change in method that let me do lvl5 ,otherwise i would have not even achieved lvl2.

only two attacks were left , the best cards in his deck.

Big bang and the ultimate, Holsta(best FS attack could bring a whole universe down , but that depends on ability to mould energy, it was same as AV sensie's best spell Omicron light!)

He said the last Two which i showcased to you cant be taught to you they are very unstable , and not suited for you.

umm could you give a visual presentation about them? ill just listen what they do? what are they made up of? and how to use them efficiently and harmlessly!

ok but i think u should prepare for ur battle with the dean's child first less than 3 hrs are left.

the 5 instructors will help you train now, i promise ill tell you the rest before we leave from here.


the instructors were more trouble i had bargained for they creamed me big time i had to use regen fruits to stay up.

i thought maybe theres a way to mix AV sensei and FS sensei's arts but i couldnt get the right timing and the elements repelled. So i stuck to mage arts to beat the first three.

the fourth one tested my strength so much that i could feel an evolution was near, my energies were rising and falling wildly.

i finished him wth time pulse and then a sneaky fireball at the back of his neck.


the four ruffled my hair and pat me in acknowledgement. the fifth one stepped forward , a large 9 fet tall 3 element half dragon, are you ready? son.

i nodded , he advised to stay in human form , as he was heavy and as a human i will have a speed advantage.

though he was so good that he hrdly moved from his spot, i could jump an where around the room on my two legs.

he sprayed me with water , struck me wth thunder and hit me with ice boulders.

i was kinda finished , but something struck me, if he wasnt moving he may not be able to judge a super fast attack.

i turned dragon and launched a big gust thn i used dissapear spell , i teleported on topp his head and sent a power ful fire taill right into his ear.

he wailed and i finished him of with my dimension rip.


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an hour was left before my match with the dean's son , meanwhile i was resting to rebuild energy after healing the 5th instructor's ear.

Two beautiful elf women brought fruits and savories fo r me too eat , i asked any beatiful natural phenomenon , or sight worth seeing here ladies ?

they nodded and pointed towards a plush forest , on the top of the hills , it had a old sacred tree too they said .


Whom should i take with me? they replied any of the rangers from our nature and horticulture department.i thanked them and they left.

the nature department was huge , its ceieling was up above at 40 ft, and so beautifull interiors , like heaven, i asked for rangers a lil young dragon guided me towrds the lab and research section.

the ranger couldnt leave wthout researchers permit so i had to directly plead them.

the doctor incharge at that hour of the day smiled and called me in, she said u wanna go sight seeing?

i said yes, but iam a lil short on time can go now? erm its a lil long journey upwards , u cant be back in 40 minutes, snce you have a match.

oh!! i sighed but ill give you the permit please show it to the ranger head and make her assign u a ranger u can go after the match for a while.

i took the permit thanked her and walked towards ranger department.


the TDA dean found me and said , aah here you are , are you ready hero!! erm i aint hero ur instructors creamed me ur son may eat mee like cake,who knows.

he laughed and said dont worry my son is very young , even if he has edge over you he wouldnt recognise it at this tender age.

i knew he was trying to calm me down.

well he said where were you going? iwas going to hand this permit to the ranger head to assign me rangeers to go sightseeing,

Ah well !! u could have directly come to me.

well he called two men and sent the permit to the ranger head and i left the department with him , to join with FS.

we were in the deans office , what a beautifull place aplace fit for a king.


Two of his children were painting in the side room,they were trying to capture the office, and they were really getting somewhere , i joined them while there were still time for my battle, and my oppnent was out with his mother so he maybe a lil late.

THE duo offered me to try a stroke ,i was skeptical that i may ruin their work but i accepted and gave a try, iwas trying to capture a engraved parapet,though i carried the blocking well but could not get the lighting right, the girl, older among the two corrected the lighting and said not bad seriosly.

i smiled and sais my sensei back home is a great artist as well, i have learned by watching him.

if u learned this much by only watching u sure have high observance , my brother will sure have a hard time with you.

i thanked her for the complement, and left when the news of his arrival reached the office.

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everything was prepared , i let him kick me in the face to check his power , my nose bled but it didnt break, i healed and was ready for the real battle.

from the beginnning , he started creaming me, he was no doubt the better time dragon among us. he used something i hant seen, from the exclamatins by the spectators, it appeared it was shatter pulse lvl 9. i said wow lvl 9 time magic i even dont have mage arts of that lvl damn good kid and to think hes just 10 yrs old.
i dodged the attack by using my tail as a spring.

then after going invisible , i whacked my tail on the back of his neck, he was dizz for a bit but thn he did smthng totally uncalled for, a spell only his family capable of doing, he did it for the first time ,and the way he pulled it of , i could see how proud the dean was.
it actually opened a gateway from which a huge beast pops out its head and bites, as the jaws shut i had turned myself into sand, the beast bite the dust lol.

frustrated by being overpowered, i tried to plan a four hit combo, but suddenly a vision came, it showed beautiful green adorned mountains, it appeared as if the sacred tree up above was calling me.

bewildred by the vision , i was unable to judge his moves and he threw me to the other corner of the room.


i regained my senses , and dodged his flying kick , he somehow appered behind me caught my tail and whacked on the floor thrice, i started incantations for a long spell, it was the brilliant shield, i locked myself in a golden ball of light, wch was immune to even his time magic, but his time vortex lvl 10 ripped my shield aparrt as mine was only lvl 4.

suddenly huge energy ran through me, i had already noticed my observance and senses getting better but now my power was rising as well,side effects of dimention training? who knows.

he threw a lil metallic pillar at me, before i knew my hand raised itself and ripped the metal to shreds , wth dimension rip.

the kid got scared a lil , i requested him to refrain from close combat, i think my power surge may harm you.

the kid started building up a energy attack , but it was very noisy , i was going to counter it with volcano beam lvl 6.

he build up a mauve ball , around 40 cm in diameter, tn directed it as a beam towards me, the attack made a deafening sound of sparks i waited for the right moment then jumped and shot my volcano beam , he switched the beam back to ball and made it absorb my beam , the ball was now as big as a planet , he launched the ball at me , and shielded himself .

i could only stare in disbelief,suddenly my wings grew in size an d i shot out super gust at the ball ,bursting it in mid air.


and i followed in wth another super gust and got the kid the twister created shook him so wildly, that he lost consciousness, so it was not a real win but i was happy to beat him.

After the batlle freespace said do u still want to see the last to of my powers?

umm ya my observance is changing every second, i think i can copy them to use against 7 hearts.

freespace stared at me for a while, then laughed haha , u cannot mimic my attacks, unless u have third eye.

anyway lets get done fast.

after he had taught all about the two attacks , we went on for sightseeing the sacred tree reacted wildly seeing me, TDA dean, did a ritiuaal to call forth Mother Nature, she told us that iam the one to wield the knowledge of nature element,she kept her hand on my head to enlighten me and gave me some new powers as well.


Back at TDA , we had to leave after 4 hrs , so we decided to rest a lil. whille sleeping i fellt tremors through my body , i felt a piercing headacche , i jumped down and looked into the mirror, and was shocked , it was right there , right in the middle of my forehead, was the flickering , half developed.............. Third eye.


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We reached academy wth teleport level 10 , since time was short on our hands(its ironic god of time and space was short of time)

Sage dean and AV sensei were miffed with me but surprised to see us together.

Freespace accounted for the turn of events,he said washka could be extracted any moment, have u done the preparation i asked for.

yes we have, but how will we save here if dont know where they are?

i can track them if u have any of their belongings left ,i said.

Dean sage looked down on me and said you sure you are up for it kid?

i dont have choice sir.

he smiled and handed me waskas scarf , and the next moment we were there ( umm yup Teleportation lvl 10)

it was a dragons layer , possibly a plasma dragons layer, we saw the dark being sitting on the throne ordering his minions, and by his side inside too huge crystals were Doc and Washka , they were kinda same as the statue so it was obvious the crystal preserved them all these years, the crystals were kept on pentacles and two extraction kilns were set up alongside, the weapon to kill freespace was almost ready , but the enchanting cant be done wthouth sacrificing doc and washka.


AV quicly dashed across the cave and destroyed all of the minions with a single move, called blinding light.


and sage rich , encaged the darklord, in a light element prison.

freespace , tried to get doc and washka out but hesaid this is crystallized dragon saliva, it wont be easy to break it.

he told me to use dimension rip on it with my claws.

i did break the crystal , but it repaired it self , and the darklord kept laughing at us.

enraged and frustrade my power surge began wilder than ever before and grew 10 times in size and smmashed the crystals.

i licked both the legends to their senses.

i returned to my size and hopped around waska jubiantly.

avatar destroyed the weopon to bits.

sage rich gave washka his swords, the carrot of doom(waska's fathers sword, the king of werebunnies , he gave it to him when he became immortal), and the carrot of light which washka forged himself after he became doc's student.

the darklord was still laughing he had done casting a spell , and he attacked frrespace headon , from inside the cage.

washka blocked the attack and jumped into the cage and beheaded the freak.


the headwithch used telepathy and warned that the 7hearts is back, and theres no hope to heal his corruption,he is a greater evil now.

its headed toward the haven.



we reached the haven in time the army dragons and the archers kept the corrupted 7 hearts, away from the academy.

he should not see you Freespace ordered Doc and washka to find cover.

i announced iam enoough for him, everyone stared , i want to try and cure him of his corruption,if all fails u should prepare as back up.

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well washka my fingers are aching so ill right the climax tomorrow.
tell me what you wanna do withe 7 hearts, cure him or kill him?

since I have nature elment as a gift i can cure him and since i have third eye i can kill him.

ill right the end u choose.

[hulahuga]

Originally Posted by aby arty

hula ur church story is reminding of david edding's Elenium trilogy .
so w'll have to rip it and restitch it here and there. and i am glad my ideas make u laugh.

and lol waska iam not in the feeding grounds i came back and did write a lot but bfr i could post the power was gone so i took a nap and woke up late. and now its too late in the night so i am going to bed ill wrap it up after ur feedback in the morning.

I have never read that trilogy... All of the story comes from my head actually.
And as has been said: All stories have already been told... .

The rest of your comment is gargantuan so I'll read that tomorrow, to tired now, sorry



Ps: please use paragraphs, it is a pain to read those long texts otherwise...

[washka]

well washka my fingers are aching so ill right the climax tomorrow.
tell me what you wanna do withe 7 hearts, cure him or kill him?

since I have nature elment as a gift i can cure him and since i have third eye i can kill him.

ill right the end u choose.

I think that taking in account your story is three quarter you training and gaining power techniques, some twisted big fight with other character participating too could fit. I'm kinda sure 7 hearts hasn't show all his power yet.
But in the end his destiny (of 7 hearts) is to return to mother nature, don't know if you could change it into a vegetable or all heroes reunited make some big vegetable polymorphism attack but... (Like my sword)

[aby arty]

well washka i think ill right both ends i thought of yesterday and thinkover a third one, just in case.

actually is a good time dragon , and he is the best in time magic after FS ,and after 7H comes the TDA dean.

the 7H has been corrupted with darkness , by the darklord , whom u killed back at the lair.

But since he was so easy to beat, should we introduce the real villain now? And why hasn't the corruption gone if the caster of the spell has been killed?

And since we have hid you maybe the 7H doesnt know u r alive , its possible he wants to die as hes filled with guilt and remorse for killing you two.

these are 3-4 possible twist, we could fit in to make the end interesting .
and seriously big vegetable polymorph is hilariously awesome idea, maybe the heroes turn it into pumkin and i eat it up. but the chaos inside will make a purple pumkin lol.

and maybe the real 7h is captivated somewhere else and this is some wretched imposter.

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END 1: Killing the 7H

the 7h roared aggressively and charged at me with blinding speed , i turned into plasma(AV never taught me this, but idid peek into his books, thts why i could only do lvl1, i could see him raise his eyebrow in dissaproval.)

after few bouts , i was tiring and hadnt dealt much damage, i used my newly awakened power dragon's heart and sent it rolling towards him,it did deal a lot of damage but 7h recovered quickly.( i feared if 7h used dragon's heart with his chaos doped 7 hearts it will surely collapse the dimension.)

i followed in with a dimension rip, and a scratched his left eye he wailed i pain and sent me flying with a swing of his tail.

And then it began....... the headache......... the overwhelming power.. rising by the second... and there it was... fully developed... adorning my forehead..... the third eye!

i laughed at the 7H,he said dont mock me you excuse for a dragon,he spread his wing and sent a turbulent thunder wave straight at me, to my surprise my wings grew again and counterd it with super gust.

i looked up to the 7H and said , watch this u will find this interesting,i started some incantations and a large yellow ball started to form into a symbol in my left hand , and then i activated mimic and my third eye glew purple , and a turbulent energy enveloped me , after few minutes i came out of it and yelled....

OMICRONLIGHT-HOLSTA

FS and AV stared in disbelief, mouths wide open, eyes popping,the couldnt believe their best atacks were not only copied but clubbed.


the 7H stood still in admiration and shock,he never tried to defend , and was torn to shreds.


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END 2: Curing the 7H

though i hadnt found the time to train my nature element,but i was taught few of Doc's scriptures and theories by AV sensei,in which doc had said that the key to mastering elements is within your soul, and u have to answer the call of your soul, u have to get one with that element then only u can unlock the power.

i looked deep down inside me and focused on the image of the sacred tree and mothere nature, suddely 9 portals opened up around me and immense energies began flowing around me, i though of seein 7h normal and the energies directed thmslves twrd him, well the process proved successful but the immense procedure took its toll on me and i broke down, the
7h caught me as ifall , he said wake up kid , wake up kid , the portals closed and i withered into dust and dissapered into thin air.

it was for the first time that the 7h ever cried.

Doc examined where i vanished , and looked over to dean sage and said prepare for his revival it will be 100 days long ritual!

the end.


so waska which one you like ? ill cook another one up , after ur feedback.
btw , have u guessed whos dean sage?

its possible to add more to these ends , give ur views.

and yes i do have some designs in mind for many of the elements of the story, sould try and post some doodles soon.

[washka]

Interesting ends (both even if I prefer second one), but again it's overcentered to your main chara.
People's attention will quicky go down if you just center too much onto one's point of view, it'll become boring at a certain point.
Seems you like OverSuperheroes, DBZ influence, can feel some others manga too. Have you read Dan Simmons's Hyperion cycle with the Gritch story? (You should, maybe you'll like it)
Haven't discovered who's dean?

[aby arty]

u prefer me dying? that hurts.

yup ! i am wannabe goku .

ill deffinitely give hyperion cycle a try.

umm u are right about some things, i even overlooked that we have vowed the witches,and we need to free their sisters too.

so maybe i should twist the end shifting the focus from me, or should i give all characters equal exposure?

maybe we could use flashbacks into every ones origin,and life.

the deans a mod hee as well , just like AV and FS, hes a rare one to find , but i did write his name , read thoroughly and ull find.

really had fun writing this but it was cut short , as thes 3 didnt come in to laugh at the characters i gave them.