Hula and Washka's joint project thread (warning, some gore and nudity involved)

[washka]

u prefer me dying? that hurts.

Nope, don't worry.

should i give all characters equal exposure?

That would be going into some enormous and abusive description, I don't think it would be a good idea. In fact I hink you need to find some aequilibrium between main character and secondary ones, you've got something like 90% of main character's action and 10% for secondary. You can focus a bit more the action onto the bad side or onto the secondary one side using it for suspense.
Maybe you could do something like 75%-25% or 60%-40% ratio.
You could also try to create a bit more contrast when your chara is using battle technique. Maybe a less exhaustive list and harder ones to obtain.
Try create suspense during battle.

[hulahuga]

Also think of the enemies' secret weapons... Who knows one might carry a bagpipe of EVIL AWESOMENESSSS!!!! :P
The horror...


Ey Washka... Any updates??

[aby arty]

ok will show a bit of the evil side too.

@hula thats a very good idea , do you know any one whos good in mussic, here on threedy , ill make him wield the bagpipe.

i thought of a very funny end , dont know if many would like it:
after well into the fight the imposter 7h reveals itself to be none other than litch king Daddy doom, but as soon he comes into his true forrm Daughter Doom sophia comes in drags him out by the cape, " daddy , you are old enough to know that nthng comes between me and my icecream , not even a classy shoot at the best studio in britain."
and all of us in the crew rollled with laughter.

[washka]

This last one end is very funny aby.
I swear I knew it was DD! (I couldn't even imagine it)
I bet it comes from some kind of true story, am I right?

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Ey Washka... Any updates??

Yeah, now is starting what you won't like to do. You remember what I said:

Then I've got something hard waiting for you/us.
You'll see, it's a surprise, but don't worry, it's part of the work.

It's a two steps process we need to do, absolutly, it's really important for the project, you'll understand soon, it's not easy but has to be done.

So the first step is:

1)Make YOUR personal summary of Hula's story/ideas
2)Make YOUR personal summary of Washka's story/ideas
3)Make YOUR personal summary of Aby's story/ideas

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Each resume has to contain 5 sentences max and each sentence has to be approximately between 15 and 40 words max. You need to do it for the three ones
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CHOOSE what YOU really like into the story, we don't give a **** about who has written it, just make 5 sentences, try to use the subject/verb/complement form, and try get some logical order between those 5 sentences.
A sentence can also contain some description, action, feeling, or something else.
You take the best part of it, and if you want to: you can add some extra comments after the 5 sentence in the case you want to explain a bit more the part you like. But please try to be short. And one more last thing:

DONT POST IT YET!!! keep it on a texto for copy/paste later, just said something like "Done the three summary!" It's really important, if outsiders want to do the exercice, people you can do it and keep it too, when everybody will have done the work, then we'll post.
I'll give the green signal when everybody has finished, please don't post your summaries before that.


Exemple of the texto you can obtain:

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Hula's:
1)-The duck eat some grainy food in the park, he was so happy in this sunny morning that he wanted to fly over the clouds.
2)-The accident was dramatic, people were all running around in panic, the duck had a broken wing, he tried to hide.
3)-The farm was dark and cold, the rain had stopped, he was waiting for their return, they should have come back sooner.
4)-The little Kitty was so proud of herself, they could now finish the job, and soon she'll rule over the world.
5)-The big boat was sinking, the old capitain looked at the buoy with depair, it had to be done.

Comment: The duck is the big one (not the little one), like the dramatic influence of the Kitty too on the story.

Washka':
1)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.
2)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.
3)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.
4)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.
5)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.

Comment: I liked the blabla thing because blabla.

Aby's:
1)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.
2)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.
3)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla liked the carrot blade stuff.
4)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.
5)-Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla, Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla
Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla Blablabla.

Comment: And DD tried the extra Big Bang attack with some cheese.

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But please don't post it yet, this part is quite important, don't worry about the scenario work you've done before.
Use your own criticism and taste, try to choose the best sides of the story in each ones.
When everybody is "Done" then we'll go onto the second step.
Hard too but easier than first one.

I'll make my three summaries now, I'll said when I'm done. Have fun.

[washka]

I hope you can do that this week so we work more onto scenario until end of week and finish it. / freeze it. Character/Environement aspects will have to be taken into account.
Then next week maybe the "cut" work of the scenario/timeline (for the boards) and maybe we start da real sketchwork concepts and compo layout.

[hulahuga]

One question...

Was Aby's gigantic story actually serious?? :O (no hard feelings Aby ).



Secondly...

Please do this as well you other forum members as this is a crucial part of the project .



Thirdly...

Done!



Edit: Updated the first post with information about the review process

[hulahuga]

Originally Posted by aby arty

@hula thats a very good idea , do you know any one whos good in mussic, here on threedy , ill make him wield the bagpipe.

Pick Tom or preferably someone from Scotland... At least he is British .

[aby arty]

so to simplify u mean each of us write a summary of each story? there comes the brainaching i knew it.

@Doc if there were hard feeling u would be daughter doom's ice cream
but do u seriously think it wasnt worth the effort? my finger joints will hate you then

umm bugs bunny always says whats up doc? may be washka bunny can come up to doc hula while chomping on carrots and say the iconic line.


and my story wont be complete untill the 3 teacher mod's have a tearing bellyaching laugh out of it.

@bagpipe tom sir ? will think of that but our there any real musician friends of ur who are on threedy,
or if you know someone we could build him in our story.

[washka]

I wonder if Vatsel don't use some musical instrument?

write a summary of each story?

Nope five different sentences, each sentence is some kind of summary/part/precise idea of the part of the story you liked the most. Really important to differentiate each.

Omg Hula, you're a killing machine, o_O I don't even started the 5 sentences summary onto aby's. I'll hurry.

It has to be the best of the best for you and for each one (concept scenario), so you need to take everything into consideration, the best part of it, what touched you the most in aby's, in washka's and in yours. And the sentences have to describe it "acely".
I still got something like one or two more hours into it. Seeya later.

[Edit] I'll edit when I finished another part
My 5 sentences summaries:
-Done for Hula's part.
-Done for Aby's part.
-Done for Washka's part

[hulahuga]

A bit like the hardest difficulty on Quake 4 then...
"General - You are a never ending nor stopping rampaging death machine" (Or something like that ).

Nah but I always try to keep everyones story in my mind as I am taking them quite seriously as well as I think it is fun to brainstorm . And yeah I did understand what you meant in your instructions . Great initiative btw.. And I don't think of this as a hard part, more as a necessary part of the process (which is actually quite fun )



Aby the artsy-partsy purple with black dots halfass dragon (pretty good huh ) - Was definitely worth it . Extremely long and completely lacking any resemblance of good paragraphing, but it was also an extreme amount of fun with giggle-bringing text :P!

Bunny idea sounds cool as well .




Ps: I am DA SMILEY MASTER!

Ps2: DD plays bass ffs! He even has his own band, who are great btw . But it would be better if he had a duet with the bagpipe dude, or perhaps a jam battle. Bagpipe versus Doomstyle bass

[washka]

But I've done it.
Done my 3 summaries, I'll go sleep soon.
Will just wait for Aby's, then I'll greenlight so we can all post the 15 sentences.
Aby, are you on ?
Maybe tonight, maybe tomorrow, then second step of the process.
Seeya.
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The marines battallions were waiting into the bunker.
They knew they were surrounded and outnumbered by a bunch of bloodthirsty zerglinks b*st*rds. They knew they'll had to go out when the reinforced iron doors will open with the alarm sound and the greenlight.
But they knew it'll rock in hell.

[hulahuga]

Boyaah!! .

or

Need a light??




(I'm a firebat )

[aby arty]

well you are already done.

i was just thinking about that we didnt finalise on an ending for my story and u also told me about tweaking main characters exposure. so shouldn't i finalise it first.?

and for summarizing, our stories are broken into many posts so maybe we should post the story again in a single post, talking about it would be easier then.?

[washka]

well you are already done.

i was just thinking about that we didnt finalise on an ending for my story and u also told me about tweaking main characters exposure. so shouldn't i finalise it first.?

No it's ok, we'll work again on the end, and on the chara later, now we're on summaries and we're waiting to you

and for summarizing, our stories are broken into many posts so maybe we should post the story again in a single post, talking about it would be easier then.?

It's ok, don't really need to do that (if you want to, and have time, you can do one big post with the three ones, but I would prefer you'd finish your summaries).
Hula's got something like two or three story post, I got one, and you got four or five if I'm right, just read it and when you really like something, write the sentence, when you've got the texto (my previous post with the constraints thing), just said: "I'm done" (Don't post it).
Try to do that today so we can go onto the next part, Hula and me have already finished the summaries. Good luck.

[aby arty]

thats what iam saying, i was lost in the hubhub, of u guys rolling and reshaping the cloister idea .

so to write a summary ill have to seperate it as two stories , and since you have given so many options back there which post to consider and which not.