another woman render

Tempest811 · 19-06-2003, 06:50 AM

eyebrows + eyelashes look super-fake but the lips r awesome. it balances out to a good model

Mafty · 19-06-2003, 01:31 PM

your facial proportionas arent very good, and agreeing with tempest, the eyebrows and eyelashes do lok to fake, the lips look good but are to large for that face.

jeremypr · 19-06-2003, 02:57 PM

jeb · 19-06-2003, 07:32 PM

the eyes disturb me more than the eyebrows and eye lashes,, also the mesh isnt too prety, are those 7 sided polys near the nose

Incitatus · 19-06-2003, 07:57 PM

I agree with Jeb mesh definately needs work. Try following the natural lines of a head.

Also It looks like the camera work is contributing to the 'weirdness'

Tempest811 · 19-06-2003, 08:14 PM

it looks like she got an uber facelift

jeremypr · 20-06-2003, 06:00 AM

umm try bite me...and those are just the visible edges freakin morons

criticism is supposed to sound positive not hateful

Tempest811 · 20-06-2003, 06:32 AM

our comments arent hateful- thats just your improper interpretation of them.

Ivinia · 22-06-2003, 04:25 PM

Jeremypr - I'm assuming your last comment was meant to be taken light-heartedly since you put a smiley face at the end...

One thing I found when drawing or painting a face - if you don't get everything positioned or proportioned correctly, it won't look like who you are trying convey. It may look 'kind of' like them, but that's it. Take the eyes for example. Your openings for them should be much smaller. right now they have that 'bulging' out effect.

jeremypr · 23-06-2003, 07:38 PM

Thank you for the help....what ive done is took some high rez pics of my references eye and im gonna spend some time honing that area...hopefully that will make it more convincing. It's actually a model of my wife and yes I think what your saying is very true...because from the middle of the face down its pretty believable but the eye area is just off. :\

jeremypr · 24-06-2003, 03:56 AM

Ivinia · 24-06-2003, 12:50 PM

Wow!! HUGE improvement on the eyes! Just a few more minor tweeks on the eyes and they will be perfect. I attached an image below. The green indicates tweaks on the folds in the skin (do NOT say the word 'wrinkles' to your wife!!) , the red lines indicate tweaks to the shape of the eye itself. You are doing a great job here, I would be happy if my heads look half as good as yours - right now, they are more like 1/10...

Keep it up, this is coming along very nicely! Looking forward to seeing more updates

jeremypr · 27-06-2003, 02:41 AM

Going to start a new thread in the work in progress section..

http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...&threadid=7908

19-06-2003, 04:38 AM	#1
jeremypr Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: usa Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	another woman render

19-06-2003, 06:50 AM	#2
Tempest811 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Arizona Posts: 144 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	eyebrows + eyelashes look super-fake but the lips r awesome. it balances out to a good model __________________ Surreal Utopia

19-06-2003, 02:57 PM	#4
jeremypr Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: usa Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	heres the ref pic?

19-06-2003, 07:32 PM	#5
jeb ill post if you tell me Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: ecuador Posts: 139 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	the eyes disturb me more than the eyebrows and eye lashes,, also the mesh isnt too prety, are those 7 sided polys near the nose __________________

19-06-2003, 07:57 PM	#6
Incitatus Murdoch? That crazy fool! Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Bergen, Norway Posts: 374 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I agree with Jeb mesh definately needs work. Try following the natural lines of a head. Also It looks like the camera work is contributing to the 'weirdness' __________________ Panic, it crept up my spine like first rising vibes of an acid frenzy. All these horrible realities began to dawn on me. Here I was, alone in Las Vegas, completely twisted on drugs.. Liv www.lastgreatwar.net

19-06-2003, 01:31 PM	#3
Mafty Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Ont, Canada Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	your facial proportionas arent very good, and agreeing with tempest, the eyebrows and eyelashes do lok to fake, the lips look good but are to large for that face.

19-06-2003, 08:14 PM	#7
Tempest811 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Arizona Posts: 144 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	it looks like she got an uber facelift __________________ Surreal Utopia

20-06-2003, 06:00 AM	#8
jeremypr Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: usa Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hmm umm try bite me...and those are just the visible edges freakin morons criticism is supposed to sound positive not hateful

20-06-2003, 06:32 AM	#9
Tempest811 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Arizona Posts: 144 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	our comments arent hateful- thats just your improper interpretation of them. __________________ Surreal Utopia

22-06-2003, 04:25 PM	#10
Ivinia Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Cleveland, Ohio Posts: 106 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Jeremypr - I'm assuming your last comment was meant to be taken light-heartedly since you put a smiley face at the end... One thing I found when drawing or painting a face - if you don't get everything positioned or proportioned correctly, it won't look like who you are trying convey. It may look 'kind of' like them, but that's it. Take the eyes for example. Your openings for them should be much smaller. right now they have that 'bulging' out effect. Attached Images __________________ The more I learn about 3d, the more respect I have for "those who can..." When doing 3d, I'll be glad when I am saying, "Oh yeah..." a lot more often than I am saying, "Oh crap..."

23-06-2003, 07:38 PM	#11
jeremypr Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: usa Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx Thank you for the help....what ive done is took some high rez pics of my references eye and im gonna spend some time honing that area...hopefully that will make it more convincing. It's actually a model of my wife and yes I think what your saying is very true...because from the middle of the face down its pretty believable but the eye area is just off. :\

24-06-2003, 03:56 AM	#12
jeremypr Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: usa Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	eye

24-06-2003, 12:50 PM	#13
Ivinia Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Cleveland, Ohio Posts: 106 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow!! HUGE improvement on the eyes! Just a few more minor tweeks on the eyes and they will be perfect. I attached an image below. The green indicates tweaks on the folds in the skin (do NOT say the word 'wrinkles' to your wife!!) , the red lines indicate tweaks to the shape of the eye itself. You are doing a great job here, I would be happy if my heads look half as good as yours - right now, they are more like 1/10... Keep it up, this is coming along very nicely! Looking forward to seeing more updates Attached Images __________________ The more I learn about 3d, the more respect I have for "those who can..." When doing 3d, I'll be glad when I am saying, "Oh yeah..." a lot more often than I am saying, "Oh crap..."

27-06-2003, 02:41 AM	#14
jeremypr Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: usa Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	im starting a new thread Going to start a new thread in the work in progress section.. http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...&threadid=7908

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