Train of recycled

boxxod · 09-07-2010, 04:20 AM

Is my firts work posted into forum. I used 3ds max , vray and photoshop..!!

BattlemasterXP · 09-07-2010, 09:56 AM

What is a "Train of recycled"?
A recycled train, or a train recycling trash or something?

The undercarriage in your render is way too dark - I can just see bpure black in most of these areas.
You should also work on your shaders - with maps to make them more interesting. VRay can produce great output, although you are new to 3D, so just put some more effort into it!

That dark splotch in the upper left-hand corner should be removed, as it looks anything but intended, nor artistic.

Your model itself looks okay, although I don't know what it is.
So keep on working on it!

boxxod · 09-07-2010, 06:49 PM

Ok, this is a train of recycled asphalt, and thanks for your other comments, review and attempts to show the progress, thanks

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09-07-2010, 09:56 AM	#2
BattlemasterXP Registered User Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Germany Posts: 372 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	What is a "Train of recycled"? A recycled train, or a train recycling trash or something? The undercarriage in your render is way too dark - I can just see bpure black in most of these areas. You should also work on your shaders - with maps to make them more interesting. VRay can produce great output, although you are new to 3D, so just put some more effort into it! That dark splotch in the upper left-hand corner should be removed, as it looks anything but intended, nor artistic. Your model itself looks okay, although I don't know what it is. So keep on working on it!

09-07-2010, 06:49 PM	#3
boxxod Registered User Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ok, this is a train of recycled asphalt, and thanks for your other comments, review and attempts to show the progress, thanks

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