First school assignment on inorganic modelling

angela_angela · 03-09-2010, 03:25 AM

Hi! from singapore poly and this is my first inorganic model I did. I know the lines are a bit funny but its my first model so.... Anyway comments, critiques, tips and hints are most welcomed! Thank You and have a nice day!

link for my organic model is here you can drop by and leave a comment. http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=78328

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Pepperina · 03-09-2010, 03:34 AM

Hello there! A really really good job on your first inorganic object!

If you could, you may want to work on the "joints" that connects the screen to the controller. They looked soft and fragile to me. Harden the edges there and it should be good.

I don't see anything else you can work on, the mash looks good to me but I am also quite new to maya so let's hope you get better crituques. haha. Good job!

gravitine · 03-09-2010, 04:50 AM

i like the sharpness of the round joint. if this method could be applied to the buttons and the joint would be great! keep up the good work.

pillowtalk · 03-09-2010, 08:28 AM

good job for a first model!

love the intricate details especially the power on/off button and the pivot as well. however, i think that the mesh can be further tidied up and neatened. still, great job though! =D

freakll · 03-09-2010, 08:40 AM

hey ,good job!!!

n yeah i agree with pillowtalk.. ur mesh can be further tidied n neatened.. fighting!!! lol

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angela_angela Registered User Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First school assignment on inorganic modelling Hi! from singapore poly and this is my first inorganic model I did. I know the lines are a bit funny but its my first model so.... Anyway comments, critiques, tips and hints are most welcomed! Thank You and have a nice day! link for my organic model is here you can drop by and leave a comment. http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=78328 Attachment 166949 Thank you very much for taking your time reading this. Last edited by angela_angela; 03-09-2010 at 03:32 AM..

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03-09-2010, 03:34 AM	#2
Pepperina Registered User Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hello there! A really really good job on your first inorganic object! If you could, you may want to work on the "joints" that connects the screen to the controller. They looked soft and fragile to me. Harden the edges there and it should be good. I don't see anything else you can work on, the mash looks good to me but I am also quite new to maya so let's hope you get better crituques. haha. Good job!

03-09-2010, 04:50 AM	#3
gravitine Registered User Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like the sharpness of the round joint. if this method could be applied to the buttons and the joint would be great! keep up the good work.

03-09-2010, 08:28 AM	#4
pillowtalk Registered User Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	good job for a first model! love the intricate details especially the power on/off button and the pivot as well. however, i think that the mesh can be further tidied up and neatened. still, great job though! =D

03-09-2010, 08:40 AM	#5
freakll Registered User Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey ,good job!!! n yeah i agree with pillowtalk.. ur mesh can be further tidied n neatened.. fighting!!! lol

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