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Old 13-09-2010, 03:51 PM   #1
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My first moddel in max "Bicycle"

This is my first model that made in max at home.Plz feel free 2 give feed back.This was back in 2008.Never showed to anyone

I still don't know much about the rendering.But i am Learning.

Will add more detailed Photo's of it at a later stage

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Old 13-09-2010, 04:15 PM   #2
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Can you post a side / top / front view please? Perspective looks strange in the first image you posted and front wheel looks way smaller than the rear one.
Seat could do with more subdivisions as it looks too sharp and boxy as is.

That being said, it's a good start. Post more and we'll help you.
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thanks will do..not at the right pc now but will do asap
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