The Fall of something too bright!

ariel87 · 30-09-2010, 03:38 AM

Hiiiii!!! here is another concept work! I used Photoshop. I Hope you like it!!!

Miss Mikame · 07-10-2010, 12:34 AM

oooo! biblical....

Avatar-3DT · 08-10-2010, 05:31 AM

Its an okay imagine 'tho I think that for such a bright light there is too less contrast in the shadows over the trees. And the trees themselfs cast no shadow they they should. And since you added a star flair you should add some lens flair to match it (you know, circular or polygonal artifacts going in a straight line from the light source towards the view point).
As another suggestion I would advise you to darken the sky more, a bright light tends to do that to the environment. Its a nice enough piece but if you want to make it a good piece you should work more on it.

30-09-2010, 03:38 AM	#1
ariel87 Registered User Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Fall of something too bright! Hiiiii!!! here is another concept work! I used Photoshop. I Hope you like it!!! --BLOG--

07-10-2010, 12:34 AM	#2
Miss Mikame Conscripted Optimist Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Out there, way out there! Ok fine, New Zealand Posts: 182 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	oooo! biblical.... __________________ My Sketchbook of many things Aaaaaah! my arm got de-rezzed again. Grab my disk would ya please.

08-10-2010, 05:31 AM	#3
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,625 Thanks: 4 Thanked 110 Times in 104 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Its an okay imagine 'tho I think that for such a bright light there is too less contrast in the shadows over the trees. And the trees themselfs cast no shadow they they should. And since you added a star flair you should add some lens flair to match it (you know, circular or polygonal artifacts going in a straight line from the light source towards the view point). As another suggestion I would advise you to darken the sky more, a bright light tends to do that to the environment. Its a nice enough piece but if you want to make it a good piece you should work more on it. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

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