Austin Cambridge

[Rajat]

Hello, This is my latest work.I'm posting this first time on 3dtotal.This is the car model of 1937's Austin Cambridge.I collect refrences from Internet then I modeled it in Autodesk Maya & Render in Mental Ray.Modeling,Texturing/Shading,Lighting/Rendering all of these have been done by myself.Hope you like it.All comments are welcome.

https://sites.google.com/site/mmnaturalvfx/3d-artwork

[McFly]

Very nice car. Can you post more renders with other viewing angles please?

Crits:
- there seems to be some water droplets on the exhaust pipe
- window material needs more work as it looks like plastic right now.
- front right wheel almost floats. Squash tires a little bit for more realism.
- reflection on the top side doesn't run till the back of the car, can you post a wireframe so we can see what's up with that area?
- not sure about indicators' material, should be more transparent.
- looks like you used a bump or normal map for tire treads but it's a bit too smooth.

Anyway, good job. Gotta love retro cars!

[Rajat]

Thanks for your nice words & advice.I will refine it & post soon.I saw your work.That is amazing.But I will comment them after judging.....

[rvs]

Originally Posted by McFly

- there seems to be some water droplets on the exhaust pipe
- window material needs more work as it looks like plastic right now.
- front right wheel almost floats. Squash tires a little bit for more realism.
- reflection on the top side doesn't run till the back of the car, can you post a wireframe so we can see what's up with that area?
- not sure about indicators' material, should be more transparent.
- looks like you used a bump or normal map for tire treads but it's a bit too smooth.

i think he's right! i like the job but you can make it much better. try now!

[Rajat]

Okay.Now I'm posting it again.I have done all the things which were uncompleted.Please feel free to tell me any issue in my work.
Thanks.

[McFly]

Rajat, man! You have posted a great update. It's so much better now. Good job on the windows, we can now see the seats. There's just a strange artefact on the right half of the windscreen, looks like it's scratched or something.

[Rajat]

All Right.This is the final render.Great Thank to McFly.

-Thanks

[McFly]

Great work man. Onto your next piece!

[Rajat]

Thank you very much McFly.With your comments & advices I learned so much.I have also posted a mobile model.