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Old 18-12-2010, 10:53 PM   #1
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Lion-O WIP

Hi everyone! I'm working for a while in this model of Lion-o in my free time, now I'm blocked I would like to know what you think about him!
Thank you so much!
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Old 20-12-2010, 01:47 PM   #2
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I love the style of this!

I think he needs to look more lion-like, although this could show through once you start on the materials. At the moment he looks more human.
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Old 20-12-2010, 04:13 PM   #3
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Hello Chris, thanks for your comment. I understand the idea, but basically what i wanted to do was keep the original style of the character by adding only a cartoon touch, as you say, the textures will do the rest!
I'm not sure about the proportions of the character, what do you think?

PS: sorry for my english!
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Old 21-12-2010, 11:18 AM   #4
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I really like the proportions, certainly enhances the cartoon feel. Perhaps try a bit of toon shader materials on the model, will really suit the style.

Nothing wrong with your english mate.
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Hey! Great model! Really like it. The only thing I don't like is his left hand (the one hanging down).
The face and hair is very nice! good job so far.
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This is great, love the design for him, you going to texture and rig?
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Old 21-12-2010, 05:49 PM   #7
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Hi guys! thanks for the comments^crits, helped me out of the hole to continue with this model, i'm working a little more in the pose and probably post some progress later ...
Chris, I liked the idea of using toon shader, I'll try.
Ocine, thanks! I don]t like the left hand too haha, I'm working to correct that!
Tarik, thanks, now I will apply only materials/shaders, the model is already rigged to put it in pose. Then I'll upload some views.

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Old 21-12-2010, 11:55 PM   #8
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As promised some progress, i was working on the body shapes, the pose and hair ...

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Old 24-12-2010, 04:57 PM   #9
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Good work so far, i like the style. Did you plan to do his claw glove? If not his left hand still need some work.
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