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Old 24-12-2010, 06:14 AM   #1
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1934 morgan

hey guys here is a project that i have been working on for a while. the modelling is done in 3ds max and im in the process of texturing the vehicle now. any critics welcome
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Old 24-12-2010, 06:52 AM   #2
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Great modelling so far, nice clean modelling.
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Old 24-12-2010, 05:38 PM   #3
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thanks i will post up some wires next.
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Old 25-12-2010, 08:53 PM   #4
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looking great pav! remember what we talked about adding little features like the tax disc and badges at front bit of the car
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Old 28-12-2010, 12:20 PM   #5
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i started texturing the vehicle, here is a small update :
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Old 28-12-2010, 01:43 PM   #6
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It's missing some thickness cos edges are looking way too sharp as they are.
Chrome at the wheel center looks odd.

Nice car old school car!
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Old 02-01-2011, 10:11 PM   #7
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hi mcfly are you referring to the thickness of the wings above the wheels or the main shell. here are some ore renders that might make it look a bit more presentable. (sorry it tooks so long to reply ive been very busy with uni assignments)
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here is another shot.
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Nice old car, i think he is refering to the overall thickness. Now this is more a miniature model than a real one because of the thickness. Its look too fragile. Anyway i still like it, good work.
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Old 04-01-2011, 10:07 PM   #10
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thank you for your kind words. i guess i need more parctice, im not quet there yet. i kinda see what you and mcfly are talking about now. i had a look over some renders, and the reference material that i was using to make the model and it does look weaker then the real thing but i still like some renders, it was a learning curve for me to be working on this project its the first time i used vray so i really enjoyed it i will post up some final renders asap
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Old 05-01-2011, 01:21 AM   #11
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Even if it doesnt quite look like the original this is still a good image. The last 2 renders are really nice. The first red one is a little strange, it seem the car float a little.

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Renders are fine! Only crit is the general thickness. Just increase Shell modifier's thickness and it will look much better.

Keep going man, you're doing good.
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Old 10-01-2011, 03:34 AM   #13
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@silok: thanks a lot

@McFly: thanks you erm i already callapsed the geometry so i couln't thicken the object, unfortunatly i can work on it any longer as i have other projects that i am working on, im in my third year at the university of Hertfordshire so time is a luxury at the moment. here are some updates as promised.
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Very nice, material and lighting are good.

Don't know if intentional but DOF makes it look like a miniature. On to your next project!
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Old 26-01-2011, 12:02 PM   #15
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hey guys here is another on going project for my showreel. i was working in mental ray on it with a bit of help from jeff pattop tutorials on lighting but i decided to take it intro vray so here is some shots of the model. its still no where near finished tell me what you guys think
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