Study Room

jackieteh · 30-12-2010, 12:50 PM

Hi, This is a re-do project of a study room for a private house in Malaysia,
hope you like it, all critiques and comments are welcome,
thank you.

3ds max + vray + photoshop

3DsAction · 30-12-2010, 02:31 PM

nice job, and Great work

Tanks for your comment

djmj · 30-12-2010, 11:01 PM

Looks great Jackieteh

jackieteh · 31-12-2010, 04:00 PM

3DsAction, djmj:

Thank you

cod-x · 31-12-2010, 06:54 PM

Really nice work.Everything is very fine except the environment outside the windows.The background image has a bit distorsion,and there would be nice if it has some color correction,and contrast as well.I really don't feel if there would be any glass in those windows.

jackieteh · 03-01-2011, 10:01 AM

cod-x:
Thank you for the comment about the background and the glass,
i have check it out and agree about the distorsion of the background,
and i have forgot to unhide the glass layer in this rendering,
silly me and sorry

rocneasta · 03-01-2011, 10:09 AM

for a higher dose of realism you might wanna change the textures of the furniture - since they are all from the same image map - no real drawer has unified and continuous texture as others above it. In case you forgot, you need to remove affect lighting on the image background that you placed outside your room. If that's not the case that's it so burned out, perhaps change it in Photoshop, or find another more suitable one

overall feel is clean and it look good

VRayGuide · 04-01-2011, 03:57 AM

Clean render but what's up with the background..
floor cracks also looks huge..and carpet stretched...you better find a higher resolution texture for that..

URs3D.net · 04-01-2011, 10:20 AM

Why render such awesome pictures..And put up such a crappy background?! Like cod-x said.

dark night2008 · 05-01-2011, 11:40 AM

nice work mate ..... your work improve a lot keep up the good work

McFly · 05-01-2011, 07:08 PM

Well, I don't think I need to mention background images then.

There's a bit of aliasing going on. Fix what has been said above and your render will be a killer!

What's up with the tea set on the left hand side, second render. It looks scaled horizontally.

URs3D.net · 05-01-2011, 08:11 PM

McFly, i think the AA problem is due to the image compression. He should upload it externally and not via threedys image uploader. I think that will fix it.

jackieteh · 13-01-2011, 11:01 PM

rocneasta:
Thank you very much for the useful comments,
been busy on some project this few days,
will keep on to re-do this scene on my free time.

jackieteh · 13-01-2011, 11:02 PM

VRayGuide:
Hey, i glad you are here man,
i always read your blog

jackieteh · 13-01-2011, 11:04 PM

URsProductions:
It my fault to make you feel bad about my rendering,
actually i am still learning on mapping and texturing skills,
do you have any good tutorial or idea on this?

30-12-2010, 12:50 PM	#1
jackieteh Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Malaysia Posts: 691 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Study Room Hi, This is a re-do project of a study room for a private house in Malaysia, hope you like it, all critiques and comments are welcome, thank you. 3ds max + vray + photoshop Attached Images

30-12-2010, 02:31 PM	#2
3DsAction Registered User Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice job, and Great work Tanks for your comment __________________ Mojtaba Shabanzadeh

03-01-2011, 10:09 AM	#7
rocneasta in search of excellence Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: 25m2 flat Posts: 5,402 Thanks: 113 Thanked 405 Times in 363 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 31	for a higher dose of realism you might wanna change the textures of the furniture - since they are all from the same image map - no real drawer has unified and continuous texture as others above it. In case you forgot, you need to remove affect lighting on the image background that you placed outside your room. If that's not the case that's it so burned out, perhaps change it in Photoshop, or find another more suitable one overall feel is clean and it look good __________________ ..LinkedIN.. \| Twitter.. \| IMDB

04-01-2011, 03:57 AM	#8
VRayGuide Registered User Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 89 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Clean render but what's up with the background.. floor cracks also looks huge..and carpet stretched...you better find a higher resolution texture for that.. __________________ NEW VRayART Website http://www.vrayart.com

04-01-2011, 10:20 AM	#9
URs3D.net CGI Freelancer Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Currently working and living in Cologne. Posts: 908 Thanks: 5 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Why render such awesome pictures..And put up such a crappy background?! Like cod-x said. __________________ visit me on URs3D.net follow me on twitter

30-12-2010, 11:01 PM	#3
djmj Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: sweden. But i like to move around... Posts: 447 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks great Jackieteh

31-12-2010, 04:00 PM	#4
jackieteh Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Malaysia Posts: 691 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	3DsAction, djmj: Thank you

31-12-2010, 06:54 PM	#5
cod-x hungarian CG warrior Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Hungary,Szombathely Posts: 27 Thanks: 2 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Really nice work.Everything is very fine except the environment outside the windows.The background image has a bit distorsion,and there would be nice if it has some color correction,and contrast as well.I really don't feel if there would be any glass in those windows.

03-01-2011, 10:01 AM	#6
jackieteh Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Malaysia Posts: 691 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	cod-x: Thank you for the comment about the background and the glass, i have check it out and agree about the distorsion of the background, and i have forgot to unhide the glass layer in this rendering, silly me and sorry

05-01-2011, 11:40 AM	#10
dark night2008 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 440 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	nice work mate ..... your work improve a lot keep up the good work

05-01-2011, 07:08 PM	#11
McFly Monogon Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Ye Ole Continent Posts: 3,184 Thanks: 8 Thanked 245 Times in 232 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Well, I don't think I need to mention background images then. There's a bit of aliasing going on. Fix what has been said above and your render will be a killer! What's up with the tea set on the left hand side, second render. It looks scaled horizontally. __________________ You see what happens Larry? You see what happens when you meet a stranger in the Alps? - Walter Sobchak My WIP dump

05-01-2011, 08:11 PM	#12
URs3D.net CGI Freelancer Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Currently working and living in Cologne. Posts: 908 Thanks: 5 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	McFly, i think the AA problem is due to the image compression. He should upload it externally and not via threedys image uploader. I think that will fix it. __________________ visit me on URs3D.net follow me on twitter

13-01-2011, 11:01 PM	#13
jackieteh Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Malaysia Posts: 691 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	rocneasta: Thank you very much for the useful comments, been busy on some project this few days, will keep on to re-do this scene on my free time.

13-01-2011, 11:02 PM	#14
jackieteh Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Malaysia Posts: 691 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	VRayGuide: Hey, i glad you are here man, i always read your blog

13-01-2011, 11:04 PM	#15
jackieteh Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Malaysia Posts: 691 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	URsProductions: It my fault to make you feel bad about my rendering, actually i am still learning on mapping and texturing skills, do you have any good tutorial or idea on this?

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