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Old 02-02-2011, 09:40 PM   #1
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Miss Portman

Heres a quick two hour go at modelling the lovely Miss Portman.

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Old 02-02-2011, 10:25 PM   #2
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Not bad. Is your mesh quite dense? It seems to be pinching in places
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I've got some triangles that I'm removing. so this should clear that effect.
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Heres the latest, with some of those tris removed. Also cleaned up the flow a little.
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Still an issue on her brow u got a funny joining there?
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Old 02-02-2011, 11:04 PM   #6
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Yeah your right. Think I got them all.

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Old 03-02-2011, 12:34 AM   #7
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there's still pinching every where, it's good to also show wires so we can provide better feedback
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