Audi R8

3dboldicotti · 12-03-2011, 05:28 PM

Hello Guys,

this is my last work about the Audi R8, I hope you like it..however any comment, suggestion it'll be welcome.

see you

parleee · 12-03-2011, 06:57 PM

Not bad, could use some modeling cleanup/detailing though.

Keep in mind when you cut out the gaps for different body panels, they really should be separate meshes, as opposed to simple intrusions, makes it look off.

The uber grainy concrete texture is a throw-off too, and should be toned down. Not a fan of the tire texture either.

Headlights look good though, and the model is pretty clean.

Keep it up.

astroAJ · 13-03-2011, 02:57 AM

nice model, I think that the tires could be deflated a bit. I also think that the ground is making the rest of the scene way to grainy.

Keep it up

12-03-2011, 05:28 PM	#1
3dboldicotti Registered User Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: London Posts: 55 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Audi R8 Hello Guys, this is my last work about the Audi R8, I hope you like it..however any comment, suggestion it'll be welcome. see you Attached Images

12-03-2011, 06:57 PM	#2
parleee Canadian, eh? Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Manisnowba Posts: 1,226 Thanks: 32 Thanked 37 Times in 35 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Not bad, could use some modeling cleanup/detailing though. Keep in mind when you cut out the gaps for different body panels, they really should be separate meshes, as opposed to simple intrusions, makes it look off. The uber grainy concrete texture is a throw-off too, and should be toned down. Not a fan of the tire texture either. Headlights look good though, and the model is pretty clean. Keep it up. __________________ Rawr? Looking for work. * http://vimeo.com/27518412 my panhead model, free to use for credited, non-commercial work. https://www.dropbox.com/s/z086qvlg33h42rg/panhead.zip

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astroAJ ʘὦʘ → Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 989 Thanks: 123 Thanked 139 Times in 133 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 12	nice model, I think that the tires could be deflated a bit. I also think that the ground is making the rest of the scene way to grainy. Keep it up

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