Dominace War V - 3D - Ezier, GOD of Assassins - GlennTKD

[GlennTKD]

Hey everyone this is my WIP page, all of my DOM work from now on will be posted here. good luck everyone else.

I like gods :-)

[liquidbear]

welcome and good luck in the war

[GlennTKD]

Ok so here's my story for my GOD character,

The master of shadows roomed the wars of years gone gaining the talent and experience necessary to take on a god, Ezier the assassin roamed the shadows every day until his opportunity arose and when that day came he uses all his might to outwit and grasp the power from the arrogant god of darkness and now he is self-proclaimed GOD of Assassins!

Since that day the rest of the gods are furious of how a mortal could rise to become a god, even now they fail to realise Ezier is now more than just a man and is a greater threat to them then they could ever imagine as Ezier still holds himself on the side of mortals, he fights with them and opposes the gods.

[liquidbear]

nice he sounds kick ass

[GlennTKD]

Thanks man, can't wait to really start building him, dying for this now! :-)

[GlennTKD]

Hey everyone here is my first concept pic, let me know what you think please

[liquidbear]

sweet

[vox360]

Nice concept dude, Keep up teh good work..

ludo ftw!!

[GlennTKD]

@ VOX

Are you entering?

[GlennTKD]

2 More messing around concept pics.

[mix_mash]

The first concept pic looks like you traced over Strider Hiryu. Did you use him as your base?

Actually, the other concepts look like they were traced as well. It's a good way to start but rely too much on it.

Paul
(mix_mash)

[DeoxyWater]

Love the drawing style and the motion.

I like the stomach part and the cloak of the second one, also the shoulder of the third one.

[SnappedStrings]

The first thing I noticed when I looked at this was that he looks too young. Almost like a kid. I mean, the concept story is that he's so badass he killed God and became one himself, right? This kid seems like he'd stutter on a prom date, let alone kill god.

I think making him older, tougher looking, and wiser would sell the character in every sense. I really like the idea you're going for with the flowing cloth. I'm a big cloth guy too, love sculpting it and incorporating it into characters.

Also, I don't know whether you traced or not, but as far as I know it's not technically against the rules since you only used silhouette, and it's still very early concept. But this habit can become a real crutch and will also serve to pigeon-hole your design. Before you know it, your character is the little brother of the character you silhouetted. And the big key at this level of design is to get as much exploration as possible. You never know what you might have missed unless you look for it.

Hope this helps you, looking forward to see where it goes!

[GlennTKD]

There only concept drawings, its hard to show age with thick lines on a black edge, but thanks for the crits, i have to admit they do look kiddish but my character will be a middle aged man/Vulcan.

Oh and as far as tracing over an image i didn't do that, i honestly had to google Strider Hiryu, i'm not a fan of fighting games so never heard of him, i did use the FF world as a general reference though, it was what i had in mind.

[Vitrux]

The concept you have i mind is really good, but you are rigth he must looks older older! ! even older than your last draw. and more powerfull. We should look at him and we should not have any doubt that he is the God of assassins..
Good job, keep going