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Old 16-03-2011, 08:20 PM   #1
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Old 22-03-2011, 03:47 AM   #2
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here{s some idea, a prison complex in space, abandoned planet or somthing, or abandoned prison complex in space in abandoned planet, inside... atomhawk.... that sounds to much like alien 3??? i think... c&c welcome
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Old 22-03-2011, 09:25 AM   #3
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nice idea bro....keep it up
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maybe something big far off in the distance, possibly in the sky. But I like what you got going now.
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Old 22-03-2011, 01:14 PM   #5
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Very nice. Like your use of blending with the colors and the texture it gives

One thing you could think about is whether or not you actually want the horizon line in the middle, composition wise...
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thanks for the critiques guys, the are always wellcome, heres some adjusts, i'm not at home, soo. ive adjusted the horizont like hulahuga said, and some monster/alien/spirit in the back, like big toe requesteed, it gives more action to the scene i think, it is from another old drawing of mine, so i will redraw it with the wacom when i get home.
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That spirit really adds to the story!

You might make him some sort of sand spirit that pours over everything... Since they seem to be on some sort of desert planet? Perhaps it is some sort of revenge?
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Looks super cool bro! =)
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thx for the comments guys, nice idea hulahuga, i wanted to do it a bit fuzzy in the back, with atmosphere, clouds and dust over it, so it might be made of sand and scrap i think...
ive added little portion of a dark space sky with some stars, just playing around, and one with a planet, what do think about it? it add some to the composition?
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hi, the 1st thing that pops me out is that, foreground, mid-ground and background are sharing almost the same kind of values, you lose a lot of depth in the composition, try to separate the 3 main distances using this technic:

http://wiki.guildwars.com/images/b/b...boftimeuj2.jpg

Kekai Kotaki does this wonderfully, you can check some examples at his blog.

Also the prison lights are grabbing too much attention, try to dim them a bit, maybe by adding some fog.
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Glad you like it

Agreeing with elgama about the lights. They stand out a bit too much. Perhaps consider using more like light shafts and get a bit like light-dark-light-dark across the perspective, leading the eyes towards the sand monster. But I like the fact that you work with the smooth transitions, but that could come from the sand in a cool way But perhaps those towers are more like lighthouses, and in that case a large booming like like the one you have should be there...

Scrap and sand sound like a good combo, hinting towards buildings having been swept across previously...

Planet is a pretty nice idea. Not necessary though in my account. Try finding a good position for it and something that might create some creative light or form in the composition
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the atmosphere is awesome! might turn out as a mega-epic sci-fi-poster
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Looking cool, Adding the planet in the latest really works well
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Old 31-03-2011, 05:03 AM   #14
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here's some updatess, more to come soon, when i find more time to draw, lol
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Hey bro, looks like your stuff is developing here, liking the latest one more =) I particularly liked the font you used for Atomhawk too. Keep up the goodness =)
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