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Old 06-04-2011, 05:27 PM   #16
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Great base model and sculpt!
Don't overexceed with extra little details, like those little things you got on the gloves right now. He got massive gear and I think its better to keep it simpler. But that's just my opinion.
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Old 08-04-2011, 01:31 AM   #17
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hi guys !
thanks alot for your opinion!! That will help me to make better my Model.

Here is Force's backpack, It consists of several parts.
(the blimp At the top,it's Used to collect the deceased their souls. It can be a separate activity.
the Fire system and the Power system)
I will try to keep pieces can be Sliding or Rotation.
colours are just to show the different masterials,they're not representative of some real colours.
next step, polishing and adding details on force's body to Zbrush.



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Old 08-04-2011, 06:19 AM   #18
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Well, clearly you've got modeling skillz to burn, and you're crazy fast. There's a load of cool details there. I'm not feeling the overall shape tho.



The green, is aces. That's got a nice sleek shape to it, nice profile, interesting silhouette, everything. That works, I really dig that bit.

The blue, kind of works, but its kind of blocky. I think it just needs refined with some some sleeker shapes.

The red, is committing silhouette genocide. Scale it down to 1/3 of the size it is now, or rip it off altogether. Not feelin' it. [Personally, I'd tear it off, and place one those cool circles with the 6 smaller circles and the 5 spoke widgets where it attached to the green bit, and call it a day.]

I'm not saying its bad, or the details on it are are bad, on the contrary its got nice details, and on its own, it would be an interesting...something, but as far it its influence on the overall design, I think it does more harm than it does good.

Just my two cents anyway.

Good stuff overall. Mad detailing, I look forward to more of that.
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Old 08-04-2011, 08:07 AM   #19
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+1 to the comment above, although the level of detail is huge here, I'm not seeing it flowing correctly.

Additionally, God's should be able to flly on their own imo hehehe nah, joking, but still I would give this backpack another purpose.
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Old 08-04-2011, 11:54 AM   #20
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hi,dudes!it's really great advice!! thanks alot!! I will be gradually improved after other parts of the completed.
here is the transformation GIF .

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Old 12-04-2011, 02:26 AM   #21
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Transformers!? keep it up!
looking forward to updates.
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Old 14-04-2011, 12:16 AM   #22
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Hey guys!
Here is upper part of the body.
next step, polishing the leg and weapon.
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Old 14-04-2011, 01:08 AM   #23
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That's awesome!
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Old 14-04-2011, 08:09 AM   #24
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nice job dude! cant wait to see the weapon.
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Old 14-04-2011, 08:33 AM   #25
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great work dude . looking great . is it all done i zbrsuh?
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Old 20-04-2011, 11:09 AM   #26
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hi,guys!
TO Paulius-st:
some more maked in 3dmax except the soft parts.

Here is the High model for Armor and weapons.
I wil try to let some parts can be movable.
colours are just to show the different materials,
they're not representative of some real colours.
thanks a lot for the comments!

The GIF:


The screenshoots:




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Old 20-04-2011, 12:08 PM   #27
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He is such a bad ass. a kick-ass job!
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Old 20-04-2011, 04:29 PM   #28
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Looks terrific but one thing I thought of is how actually god-like he is... I mean he is a mean soldier that's for sure, perhaps he is a demigod, but I have a bit hard time right now picturing him next to Zeus (if you get my point ).


Keep going, this is ace!
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Old 22-04-2011, 10:12 PM   #29
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Great job!
His gear must be very hard to operate. He even has to carry the manual lolz.
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amazing.. i like it)
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