Dominance War V - 3D - Force - Bge - Page 2

Martin_x · 06-04-2011, 05:27 PM

Great base model and sculpt!
Don't overexceed with extra little details, like those little things you got on the gloves right now. He got massive gear and I think its better to keep it simpler. But that's just my opinion.

Bge · 08-04-2011, 01:31 AM

hi guys !
thanks alot for your opinion!! That will help me to make better my Model.

Here is Force's backpack, It consists of several parts.
(the blimp At the top,it's Used to collect the deceased their souls. It can be a separate activity.
the Fire system and the Power system)
I will try to keep pieces can be Sliding or Rotation.
colours are just to show the different masterials,they're not representative of some real colours.
next step, polishing and adding details on force's body to Zbrush.

Warlock 279 · 08-04-2011, 06:19 AM

Well, clearly you've got modeling skillz to burn, and you're crazy fast. There's a load of cool details there. I'm not feeling the overall shape tho.

The green, is aces. That's got a nice sleek shape to it, nice profile, interesting silhouette, everything. That works, I really dig that bit.

The blue, kind of works, but its kind of blocky. I think it just needs refined with some some sleeker shapes.

The red, is committing silhouette genocide. Scale it down to 1/3 of the size it is now, or rip it off altogether. Not feelin' it. [Personally, I'd tear it off, and place one those cool circles with the 6 smaller circles and the 5 spoke widgets where it attached to the green bit, and call it a day.]

I'm not saying its bad, or the details on it are are bad, on the contrary its got nice details, and on its own, it would be an interesting...something, but as far it its influence on the overall design, I think it does more harm than it does good.

Just my two cents anyway.

Good stuff overall. Mad detailing, I look forward to more of that.

wil_himura · 08-04-2011, 08:07 AM

+1 to the comment above, although the level of detail is huge here, I'm not seeing it flowing correctly.

Additionally, God's should be able to flly on their own imo hehehe nah, joking, but still I would give this backpack another purpose.

Bge · 08-04-2011, 11:54 AM

hi,dudes!it's really great advice!! thanks alot!! I will be gradually improved after other parts of the completed.

here is the transformation GIF .

heaton1 · 12-04-2011, 02:26 AM

Transformers!? keep it up!

looking forward to updates.

Bge · 14-04-2011, 12:16 AM

Hey guys!
Here is upper part of the body.
next step, polishing the leg and weapon.
thanks a lot for the comments!

Martin_x · 14-04-2011, 01:08 AM

That's awesome!

Pockets · 14-04-2011, 08:09 AM

nice job dude! cant wait to see the weapon.

paulius-st · 14-04-2011, 08:33 AM

great work dude

. looking great

. is it all done i zbrsuh?

Bge · 20-04-2011, 11:09 AM

hi,guys!
TO Paulius-st:
some more maked in 3dmax except the soft parts.

Here is the High model for Armor and weapons.
I wil try to let some parts can be movable.
colours are just to show the different materials,
they're not representative of some real colours.
thanks a lot for the comments!

The GIF:

The screenshoots:

heaton1 · 20-04-2011, 12:08 PM

He is such a bad ass. a kick-ass job!

hulahuga · 20-04-2011, 04:29 PM

Looks terrific but one thing I thought of is how actually god-like he is... I mean he is a mean soldier that's for sure, perhaps he is a demigod, but I have a bit hard time right now picturing him next to Zeus (if you get my point

).

Keep going, this is ace!

Martin_x · 22-04-2011, 10:12 PM

Great job!
His gear must be very hard to operate. He even has to carry the manual lolz.

Bulygin · 25-04-2011, 05:01 PM

amazing.. i like it)

08-04-2011, 01:31 AM	#17
Bge Registered User Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: FuZhou Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	hi guys ! thanks alot for your opinion!! That will help me to make better my Model. Here is Force's backpack, It consists of several parts. (the blimp At the top,it's Used to collect the deceased their souls. It can be a separate activity. the Fire system and the Power system) I will try to keep pieces can be Sliding or Rotation. colours are just to show the different masterials,they're not representative of some real colours. next step, polishing and adding details on force's body to Zbrush. Last edited by Bge; 08-04-2011 at 04:34 AM..

08-04-2011, 06:19 AM	#18
Warlock 279 Stealing your polygons! Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: 11°19′N, 142°15′E Posts: 1,048 Thanks: 1 Thanked 24 Times in 23 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Well, clearly you've got modeling skillz to burn, and you're crazy fast. There's a load of cool details there. I'm not feeling the overall shape tho. The green, is aces. That's got a nice sleek shape to it, nice profile, interesting silhouette, everything. That works, I really dig that bit. The blue, kind of works, but its kind of blocky. I think it just needs refined with some some sleeker shapes. The red, is committing silhouette genocide. Scale it down to 1/3 of the size it is now, or rip it off altogether. Not feelin' it. [Personally, I'd tear it off, and place one those cool circles with the 6 smaller circles and the 5 spoke widgets where it attached to the green bit, and call it a day.] I'm not saying its bad, or the details on it are are bad, on the contrary its got nice details, and on its own, it would be an interesting...something, but as far it its influence on the overall design, I think it does more harm than it does good. Just my two cents anyway. Good stuff overall. Mad detailing, I look forward to more of that. __________________ * Lightwave * User Last edited by Warlock 279; 08-04-2011 at 06:23 AM..

08-04-2011, 08:07 AM	#19
wil_himura Noobie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Valencia (Spain) Posts: 327 Thanks: 21 Thanked 18 Times in 18 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	+1 to the comment above, although the level of detail is huge here, I'm not seeing it flowing correctly. Additionally, God's should be able to flly on their own imo hehehe nah, joking, but still I would give this backpack another purpose. __________________ DWV WIP entry Blog

08-04-2011, 11:54 AM	#20
Bge Registered User Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: FuZhou Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	hi,dudes!it's really great advice!! thanks alot!! I will be gradually improved after other parts of the completed. here is the transformation GIF . Last edited by Bge; 08-04-2011 at 12:00 PM..

14-04-2011, 08:33 AM	#25
paulius-st Registered User Join Date: May 2009 Location: Lithuania,Vilnius Posts: 2,554 Thanks: 82 Thanked 305 Times in 288 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 16	great work dude . looking great . is it all done i zbrsuh? __________________ MY ART BLOG MY SKETCHBOOK SAMURAI BOT

06-04-2011, 05:27 PM	#16
Martin_x Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens, NY Posts: 296 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Great base model and sculpt! Don't overexceed with extra little details, like those little things you got on the gloves right now. He got massive gear and I think its better to keep it simpler. But that's just my opinion.

12-04-2011, 02:26 AM	#21
heaton1 Registered User Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Transformers!? keep it up! looking forward to updates.

14-04-2011, 12:16 AM	#22
Bge Registered User Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: FuZhou Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Hey guys! Here is upper part of the body. next step, polishing the leg and weapon. thanks a lot for the comments!

14-04-2011, 01:08 AM	#23
Martin_x Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens, NY Posts: 296 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	That's awesome!

14-04-2011, 08:09 AM	#24
Pockets The Common Karl Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	nice job dude! cant wait to see the weapon.

20-04-2011, 11:09 AM	#26
Bge Registered User Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: FuZhou Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	hi,guys! TO Paulius-st: some more maked in 3dmax except the soft parts. Here is the High model for Armor and weapons. I wil try to let some parts can be movable. colours are just to show the different materials, they're not representative of some real colours. thanks a lot for the comments! The GIF: The screenshoots: Last edited by Bge; 20-04-2011 at 02:26 PM..

20-04-2011, 12:08 PM	#27
heaton1 Registered User Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	He is such a bad ass. a kick-ass job!

20-04-2011, 04:29 PM	#28
hulahuga Dr. Hula Join Date: May 2008 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 4,647 Thanks: 139 Thanked 136 Times in 130 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Looks terrific but one thing I thought of is how actually god-like he is... I mean he is a mean soldier that's for sure, perhaps he is a demigod, but I have a bit hard time right now picturing him next to Zeus (if you get my point ). Keep going, this is ace! __________________ What does the doctor ordain today? - Hmm... What about a shot... full of ideas! Currently using: Maya - Mudbox - ZBrush - Photoshop WIP Hula's 2D Sketchbook http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=777808 Hula's 3D Sketchbox http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=76693 Hula and Waska's Joint Project Thread http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=792813

22-04-2011, 10:12 PM	#29
Martin_x Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens, NY Posts: 296 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Great job! His gear must be very hard to operate. He even has to carry the manual lolz.

25-04-2011, 05:01 PM	#30
Bulygin Registered User Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	amazing.. i like it)

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