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Old 19-03-2011, 03:42 PM   #1
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Dominace War V - 3D - Zohar, God of Restoration - Astaroth

still have to decide a name, but i'm going for a god of restoration, still have to decide the size of him, if it should be tall like a human or big like a planet, btw, i think i'm going for something like this



i really don't know how i should dress him, i'm starting to ask me things like "how a god would dress himself?" and "does a god really needs a dress?", and i really can't find an answer O_ò
i'll think about it a little more :\

btw, he has an hourglass between his hands
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Old 20-03-2011, 01:18 PM   #2
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little update

C&C are welcome XD
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Old 20-03-2011, 01:50 PM   #3
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just one proposal for name... Resthor ...

looks good
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Old 23-03-2011, 04:27 PM   #4
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thanks for the name suggestion, i'm still searching for a name that could suit on him
btw, little update

still have to detail him better, maybe i'll start to model and think about it later
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Old 23-03-2011, 05:57 PM   #5
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This is a concept I did a few months ago, if it can help your inspiration, gl onto the comp' man:
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Old 23-03-2011, 07:09 PM   #6
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nice idea and looking great, especially like the spikey things around the waist!

Only suggestion, I would lose the shoulder pads, or try something different with them, they seem a bit too 'tank' for what is otherwise quite an elegant design in shape and form
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Old 24-03-2011, 11:59 AM   #7
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thanks for the ispiration washka, that surely will come in handy later

l3xicon, you think i should remove the pad on the shoulder and wings? maybe it's better if i change them with something with a more light design?

thanks for you comments btw ^^
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Yo Asta, was just the fist idea i got when i read your post, not even the best i admit... but sometimes acts like a detonator for the good one... waiting for more man... Peace
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Old 30-03-2011, 06:21 PM   #9
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i've changed the shoulder pad, so that they are more light, i will try something different for the ones on the wings too, i don't like them so much, please tell me if you like the new version, or it's bettere if i try again something else

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I think the new shoulder armor is a better fit size wise. I wonder if you couldn't simplify it further tho. What if it were just a half ring? Horizontal like the ones at his waist, without the spikes tho, or maybe two rings stacked on top of each other? You could carry that ring/half ring motif thru-out the rest of his design as well. I think it could give him a very elegant godly look.

I kinda like the first ones to be honest. L3x is completely right tho, they're a bit too much for the rest of the design, but I'd like to see you carry the nice curve you with them over to what ever you do for the new shoulder armor.
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Old 02-04-2011, 01:33 AM   #11
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thanks warlock, i tried what you said, using some half ring, here is what has come out

it's not bad but the design seem a little too weak this way to me, what do you think about it???
btw i think i'll use the half rings idea for the wings pads, remove that central part, and change a little the design, it should come out not so bad, and i will add some glowing stone instead of that too much mechanical look in the armor
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Old 02-04-2011, 04:02 AM   #12
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Yep, like the half rings better than the bulkier armor. I don't think it makes him look much weaker as it makes him look much more devious and clever.
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ok, thanks for the comment, i've taken the ring desigh a little further, changed the lower half ring on the shoulder with two quarter rings, and added another one to follow the shape of the body, changed a little that crown too, i didn't like it as it was, here is the update

let me know what you think about it, i still have to find a solution for the wings, just put up those two half ring, but it surely deserve something better
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Old 02-04-2011, 05:54 PM   #14
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More focus "to the head".
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do you say i should detail more the face, or should i setup the things so that the attention is more attracted to the face??? i'm not an expert in character design, just draw something for myself, if you have some hints i will gladly listen to you ^__^
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