"Desert Strike" Sci-Fi

GABRIEL EM · 26-03-2011, 11:35 PM

My latest work, 3dMax , Mental Ray, Fumefx, Photoshop.

Critics are welcome !!

noyb · 28-03-2011, 05:25 AM

Good elements, but I feel the composition is lacking.
The scale of this scene is massive, yet everything reads at the same level - my eye doesn't know where to go first. I would recommend trying to introduce some atmospheric perspective so that the viewer will see the foreground first, then the destruction in the background, then the extra flying ships. It should be 1-2-3, not 1-1-1.
Good job but a few tweaks could make it better.

ballpoint · 28-03-2011, 08:20 AM

I think that the scene has a lot of potential. To be honest i think the camera view is to wide, for my taste. But the tip that i can give you is that you should work more on the position of the ship that brought that character on the rock. Honestly i can' t tell if it' s levitating or standing on the rock, which seams impossible by the look of it. So, keep up the good work !

26-03-2011, 11:35 PM	#1
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ballpoint endless thrillseeking Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 13 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good work I think that the scene has a lot of potential. To be honest i think the camera view is to wide, for my taste. But the tip that i can give you is that you should work more on the position of the ship that brought that character on the rock. Honestly i can' t tell if it' s levitating or standing on the rock, which seams impossible by the look of it. So, keep up the good work !

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28-03-2011, 05:25 AM	#2
noyb User Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: California Posts: 804 Thanks: 6 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Good elements, but I feel the composition is lacking. The scale of this scene is massive, yet everything reads at the same level - my eye doesn't know where to go first. I would recommend trying to introduce some atmospheric perspective so that the viewer will see the foreground first, then the destruction in the background, then the extra flying ships. It should be 1-2-3, not 1-1-1. Good job but a few tweaks could make it better.

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