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tongeert · 14-04-2011, 02:39 PM

This.

tongeert · 14-04-2011, 03:09 PM

or this

tongeert · 14-04-2011, 05:20 PM

tongeert · 14-04-2011, 06:55 PM

tongeert · 14-04-2011, 09:07 PM

And again some tweaks.

elgama · 14-04-2011, 09:36 PM

Hi, you idea makes me smile, but, in my opinion, there's so much you can still explore, even if you want to stick with the "toon" look.

Composition wise, a red head rocket pointing up pushes your eye to much from the main char. I would also play with some textures just to give the forms some volume , put a bit of specular in the sunglasses as they are barely visible.

Just explore and have fun. Hope it helps. Good luck

tongeert · 15-04-2011, 01:47 PM

Many thanks for your help, all crits are welcome and much appreciated. I put a bit of specular on the glasses and did something with the materials, now I still need to think of the rocket.

tongeert · 15-04-2011, 03:21 PM

Changed the color of the rocket to blue.

tongeert · 16-04-2011, 10:34 AM

Made the poster a little bit wider and added a new text layer.

tongeert · 16-04-2011, 08:47 PM

Fonts used:

Kabel Bd - Corel Corporation
Terminator Two - ALLTYPE

That was all I could find about the fonts.

tongeert · 17-04-2011, 10:58 AM

This is my final image.

tongeert · 17-04-2011, 10:58 AM

Just need to create the making of.

tongeert · 17-04-2011, 11:33 AM

The makingof:

14-04-2011, 02:39 PM	#16
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	This. Attached Images

14-04-2011, 03:09 PM	#17
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	or this Attached Images

14-04-2011, 05:20 PM	#18
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	more Attached Images Last edited by tongeert; 14-04-2011 at 05:23 PM..

14-04-2011, 06:55 PM	#19
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	more Attached Images

14-04-2011, 09:07 PM	#20
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	And again some tweaks. Attached Images

14-04-2011, 09:36 PM	#21
elgama Registered User Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Portugal Posts: 42 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Hi, you idea makes me smile, but, in my opinion, there's so much you can still explore, even if you want to stick with the "toon" look. Composition wise, a red head rocket pointing up pushes your eye to much from the main char. I would also play with some textures just to give the forms some volume , put a bit of specular in the sunglasses as they are barely visible. Just explore and have fun. Hope it helps. Good luck

15-04-2011, 01:47 PM	#22
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Many thanks for your help, all crits are welcome and much appreciated. I put a bit of specular on the glasses and did something with the materials, now I still need to think of the rocket. Attached Images

15-04-2011, 03:21 PM	#23
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Changed the color of the rocket to blue. Attached Images Last edited by tongeert; 15-04-2011 at 03:33 PM..

16-04-2011, 10:34 AM	#24
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Made the poster a little bit wider and added a new text layer. Attached Images

16-04-2011, 08:47 PM	#25
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Fonts used: Kabel Bd - Corel Corporation Terminator Two - ALLTYPE That was all I could find about the fonts.

17-04-2011, 10:58 AM	#26
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	This is my final image. Attached Images

17-04-2011, 11:33 AM	#28
tongeert Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Holland Posts: 231 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	The makingof: Attached Images

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