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Old 04-04-2011, 07:23 PM   #1
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Dominance War V - 3D - The name of create goddess project code is:godles - icex2009

Sorry for sending the wrong pic, I sign up a new ID on gameartisans to post my final work.
Because of my mistake,the work of the final version changes to this ID: EDGEX3.

The name of create goddess project code is:godless
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try to design three different stlyes.
I'll desing two avatars which are switchable
In the ancient times, gods might be just or evil in different cultures, but all originated from the same one.
English is not my mother language,so there's some details that i can't describe well, hoping for your consideration.
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Old 05-04-2011, 07:53 AM   #2
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I liked the concept on the 2nd row, with a nice touch on the hair/whip? extension and the way you spread the details, although the first one gave me more the otherwordly feeling (might be the fin)
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I liked the concept on the 2nd row, with a nice touch on the hair/whip? extension and the way you spread the details, although the first one gave me more the otherwordly feeling (might be the fin)
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Old 11-04-2011, 06:53 PM   #5
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Like upper part of the first one, and all the rest and fish side from second, good concept work so far, gl and keep it up!
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Old 11-04-2011, 08:12 PM   #6
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Looks pretty cool. I like the fish/fin/tail hair thing, that's quite interesting.
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Right one with better legs.
What's the background story/ or small idea concept of your chara? What kind of godess, what do you want to achieve? Just design? I'm a bit trackless here. But keep it up.
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The left one feels a little too much like Hatsune Miku got dumped into the Witchblade anime. Which could be an interesting direction to go.

But, I'm with waska, the one of the right with the smoother/rounder armor bits works better. Tho the feet could use a bit of re-work.

I still really like the fin/fish tail hair from your previous sketch. Maybe mixing that with the rounded armor shapes in the right of your last sketch, making those shells, or scales or a mix of both, might give birth to a really cool looking sea goddess. It'd be a bit like a mermaid, but I think lot more interesting since the "tail" come from her head rather than the traditional conjoined legs look. Just a thought anyway.
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Like upper part of the first one, and all the rest and fish side from second, good concept work so far, gl and keep it up!
I want to show some different point~
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Looks pretty cool. I like the fish/fin/tail hair thing, that's quite interesting.
I'm working hard to think about the design,there's no time but i'll do my best!
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Right one with better legs.
What's the background story/ or small idea concept of your chara? What kind of godess, what do you want to achieve? Just design? I'm a bit trackless here. But keep it up.
thanks~ I think the right one is better,too.I'm going to cteate the story of disaster~and some magic power of my charactor.I'll keep going on~
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The left one feels a little too much like Hatsune Miku got dumped into the Witchblade anime. Which could be an interesting direction to go.

But, I'm with waska, the one of the right with the smoother/rounder armor bits works better. Tho the feet could use a bit of re-work.

I still really like the fin/fish tail hair from your previous sketch. Maybe mixing that with the rounded armor shapes in the right of your last sketch, making those shells, or scales or a mix of both, might give birth to a really cool looking sea goddess. It'd be a bit like a mermaid, but I think lot more interesting since the "tail" come from her head rather than the traditional conjoined legs look. Just a thought anyway.
I'll try the armor,and I like the fish tail hair,too~
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Number one is pretty is cool, but it feels like it may be a little too busy.

Number 2 is my favorite. Its got a nice flow to it and a certain elegance. Very aquatic looking. Very cool.

Not really feelin' #3. For some reason it doesn't feel as natural as the other two do.
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