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Dominance War V - 2D - GOD of Genesis- XueXiaofei(SilSakura)
First of all, I have to say ''Hello'' to Everyone here,Because I'm a Chinese Student,so that English is a bit difficult for me to read or talk,and this is the first time for me to join the Dominance War.But I will try my best to show my skill on Painting.Good lucky~
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17-04-2011, 10:12 AM
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17-04-2011, 10:22 AM
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good!!!
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17-04-2011, 11:03 AM
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so good
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awesome work！
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20-04-2011, 09:21 PM
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Really interesting stuff you have so far.
I suppose the only crit I have is that I'm having a hard time figuring out which on of the figures is the more important one. Right now they're both competing evenly for visual attention. I think it might be worth some thought about giving one a more important visual role, to help establish a focal point in the image. Cool design and layout, I like where you're heading with it.
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I'm busy on my Thesis..so it's late..
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You should add more contrasting colours and more lightness and darkness to make the piece pop.
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