Frost assassin

fmikeart · 28-04-2011, 03:20 PM

Hi there!

I'm new here. I'm a very beginner wannabe concept artist. I started drawing one year ago from complete nothing, really i couldnt even draw a stick figure

. I learned half year by myself (internet power) and half in a concept art school. I would like to keep improving, so please add some critque to my work.

Thanks everyone!

Avatar-3DT · 01-05-2011, 08:44 PM

First of all - Welcome to Threedy!
Regarding this character - there are a few anatomical issues with his arms (his fore arms seem to "bend" easily) but nothing too bad. I would make the animal head a bit spookier (right now looks a lot like a gopher really) and also add some kind of light model working its way up towards the shoulder so the the very bright blades don't take the focus from the character's face. Other that that, the fur is too blurry IMO and you could try and work a bit more the design of the magical blades.
Very nice work so far, I'm sure you can do much better in the future. Keep posting.

fmikeart · 02-05-2011, 08:34 AM

Thank you very mutch! I'll keep that things in mind

28-04-2011, 03:20 PM	#1
fmikeart Registered User Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Frost assassin Hi there! I'm new here. I'm a very beginner wannabe concept artist. I started drawing one year ago from complete nothing, really i couldnt even draw a stick figure. I learned half year by myself (internet power) and half in a concept art school. I would like to keep improving, so please add some critque to my work. Thanks everyone! Attached Images Last edited by fmikeart; 28-04-2011 at 03:32 PM..

01-05-2011, 08:44 PM	#2
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	First of all - Welcome to Threedy! Regarding this character - there are a few anatomical issues with his arms (his fore arms seem to "bend" easily) but nothing too bad. I would make the animal head a bit spookier (right now looks a lot like a gopher really) and also add some kind of light model working its way up towards the shoulder so the the very bright blades don't take the focus from the character's face. Other that that, the fur is too blurry IMO and you could try and work a bit more the design of the magical blades. Very nice work so far, I'm sure you can do much better in the future. Keep posting. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

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02-05-2011, 08:34 AM	#3
fmikeart Registered User Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank you very mutch! I'll keep that things in mind

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