Barrel

mucsiattila · 02-07-2011, 10:23 AM

Hi!
I made this barrel to my low poly portfolio. It is not a big deal, but I hope you like it.

C&C welcome

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tsabszy · 04-07-2011, 06:38 AM

nem rossz, de szerintem a fémpánt most inkább bőrpánt egy kicsit és zöld

én inkább fémszerűre csinálnám és fém színűre is (szürkés kék, vagy néhol lehet, picit rozsdás is esetleg)

btw welcome here, hungarian patriot

MemoNick · 04-07-2011, 09:35 AM

Like it!

StefanC · 06-07-2011, 07:19 AM

is that green stuff weed or something ? model looks good though.

Perversonality · 06-07-2011, 01:33 PM

Not bad but the textures could do with some tweaks. If the metal rings are green from age and decay then I would expect the wood to be similarly weathered. I would also expect some level of discolouration where the metal is next to the wood and some more dents, scratches and scrapes in the wood

The Prime · 06-07-2011, 02:13 PM

Nice job, solid piece of work.

I'm going to wade in with my technical crits now

You could half the texture size, and make it 1024*512 or something. You could have the body of the barrel repeated around, just make it tile along the X axis. Then have the top and the bottom of the barrel sharing the same texture space.

I feel like I say this alot to people, but the smaller you can make the texture, the better. In reality you could probably half the texture again, and still achieve the same effect, it's all about being clever with your UV's and modelling.

xpander · 07-07-2011, 03:36 AM

Nice

Vitrux · 07-07-2011, 04:47 AM

Cool barrel, very clean and well made

rocneasta · 07-07-2011, 08:26 AM

i'm more content aware guy myself - so what's inside the barrel - what type of liquid

nice work btw, did you try with even less poly's

MemoNick · 07-07-2011, 08:59 AM

I agree with rocneasta, the liquid's texture isn't very well made :P

mucsiattila · 07-07-2011, 04:57 PM

First of all: thx guys!
Well... this barrel seams to be empty, but I'm planing to make a whiskey barrel, wich will be much more precise.
This time I only wanted to make something that proves, that I can do it. I mean a lowpoly barrel.
At the moment I am working on a street lantern. After it I will make an ammo box or something like that. I will post all of my works here, so you can write crits, I can learn from.
After that I will do some cleanup, makeup or remake the achieve the best I can, so I can show up a lowpoly props portfolio.
So! Thats my plan. How does it sound?

MemoNick · 07-07-2011, 06:26 PM

Sounds great. That way you can learn a lot.

mucsiattila · 12-07-2011, 10:24 PM

and here is the lantern, I have promised
not a big deal but fine for practice

feel free to comment or whatever
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The Prime · 13-07-2011, 01:45 AM

Looks good. I'd advise you to rethink your UV layout. The curly bits are very inefficient, as it could be laid out as strips.

The bottom also needs to show more wear. Granted I don't know what surface it is intended for, but a general rule of thumb is to have some sort of variation of dirt around the base of an object as grimey as this one.

Use a different shader. The current shader you're using doesn't seem to have any specular highlights to show the curve of the shape.

Good job, just needs a few tweaks.

MemoNick · 13-07-2011, 08:52 AM

I agree with Prime, but good low poly nevertheless.

02-07-2011, 10:23 AM	#1
mucsiattila Registered User Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Szeged, Hungary (EU) Posts: 66 Thanks: 9 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Barrel and more Hi! I made this barrel to my low poly portfolio. It is not a big deal, but I hope you like it. C&C welcome __________________ There is no real life! There is only AFK! (away from keyboard) Female Base Character - WIP (nudity) My Deviantart Last edited by mucsiattila; 12-07-2011 at 10:22 PM..

06-07-2011, 07:19 AM	#4
StefanC the human centipede Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 161 Thanks: 5 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	is that green stuff weed or something ? model looks good though. __________________ "I found a solution that I honestly think will work out best for one of both of us"

06-07-2011, 01:33 PM	#5
Perversonality Nick/Spud/Spudmonkey Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Reading(ish), Engerlandshire Posts: 2,752 Thanks: 21 Thanked 53 Times in 50 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Not bad but the textures could do with some tweaks. If the metal rings are green from age and decay then I would expect the wood to be similarly weathered. I would also expect some level of discolouration where the metal is next to the wood and some more dents, scratches and scrapes in the wood __________________ My homepage mostly designed to show off my <400 triangle low poly models My physical model shop: Buy my crap

06-07-2011, 02:13 PM	#6
The Prime Registered Abuser Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Staffordshire, UK Posts: 586 Thanks: 15 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Nice job, solid piece of work. I'm going to wade in with my technical crits now You could half the texture size, and make it 1024512 or something. You could have the body of the barrel repeated around, just make it tile along the X axis. Then have the top and the bottom of the barrel sharing the same texture space. I feel like I say this alot to people, but the smaller you can make the texture, the better. In reality you could probably half the texture again, and still achieve the same effect, it's all about being clever with your UV's and modelling. __________________ Visit my website*

07-07-2011, 04:47 AM	#8
Vitrux Victoria Passariello Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Spain Posts: 552 Thanks: 79 Thanked 52 Times in 49 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	Cool barrel, very clean and well made __________________ www.vitrux3d.com - Aventurine - Mr Fix It - CARGOrilla - VT-61 - Sanlik - Demolition Droid

04-07-2011, 06:38 AM	#2
tsabszy Csaba Baity Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Budapest, Hungary Posts: 573 Thanks: 66 Thanked 39 Times in 31 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	nem rossz, de szerintem a fémpánt most inkább bőrpánt egy kicsit és zöld én inkább fémszerűre csinálnám és fém színűre is (szürkés kék, vagy néhol lehet, picit rozsdás is esetleg) btw welcome here, hungarian patriot

04-07-2011, 09:35 AM	#3
MemoNick Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 184 Thanks: 10 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Like it!

07-07-2011, 03:36 AM	#7
xpander Registered User Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Brazil Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice

07-07-2011, 08:26 AM	#9
rocneasta in search of excellence Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: 25m2 flat Posts: 5,316 Thanks: 111 Thanked 395 Times in 354 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 31	i'm more content aware guy myself - so what's inside the barrel - what type of liquid nice work btw, did you try with even less poly's __________________ ..LinkedIN.. \| Twitter.. \| IMDB

07-07-2011, 08:59 AM	#10
MemoNick Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 184 Thanks: 10 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I agree with rocneasta, the liquid's texture isn't very well made :P

07-07-2011, 04:57 PM	#11
mucsiattila Registered User Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Szeged, Hungary (EU) Posts: 66 Thanks: 9 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	First of all: thx guys! Well... this barrel seams to be empty, but I'm planing to make a whiskey barrel, wich will be much more precise. This time I only wanted to make something that proves, that I can do it. I mean a lowpoly barrel. At the moment I am working on a street lantern. After it I will make an ammo box or something like that. I will post all of my works here, so you can write crits, I can learn from. After that I will do some cleanup, makeup or remake the achieve the best I can, so I can show up a lowpoly props portfolio. So! Thats my plan. How does it sound? __________________ There is no real life! There is only AFK! (away from keyboard) Female Base Character - WIP (nudity) My Deviantart

07-07-2011, 06:26 PM	#12
MemoNick Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 184 Thanks: 10 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Sounds great. That way you can learn a lot.

12-07-2011, 10:24 PM	#13
mucsiattila Registered User Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Szeged, Hungary (EU) Posts: 66 Thanks: 9 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	street lantern and here is the lantern, I have promised not a big deal but fine for practice feel free to comment or whatever __________________ There is no real life! There is only AFK! (away from keyboard) Female Base Character - WIP (nudity) My Deviantart

13-07-2011, 01:45 AM	#14
The Prime Registered Abuser Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Staffordshire, UK Posts: 586 Thanks: 15 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Looks good. I'd advise you to rethink your UV layout. The curly bits are very inefficient, as it could be laid out as strips. The bottom also needs to show more wear. Granted I don't know what surface it is intended for, but a general rule of thumb is to have some sort of variation of dirt around the base of an object as grimey as this one. Use a different shader. The current shader you're using doesn't seem to have any specular highlights to show the curve of the shape. Good job, just needs a few tweaks. __________________ Visit my website

13-07-2011, 08:52 AM	#15
MemoNick Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 184 Thanks: 10 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I agree with Prime, but good low poly nevertheless.

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