 |
|
|
|
|
|
| |
|
|||||
09-07-2011, 07:19 AM
|
#1 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Karachi
Posts: 16
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
|
Scifi Environment
Following is my first scifi environment I recently worked on, more to come in line, Waiting for your comments. Made this artwork using Maya, MR and Nuke. I lots of images for texturing and matte painting purposes for it from Google.
|
|
|
|
09-07-2011, 07:20 PM
|
#2 |
|
Victoria Passariello
 Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Spain
Posts: 552
Thanks: 79
Thanked 52 Times in 49 Posts
|
Nice concept, I would take out the Levis sign..
__________________
www.vitrux3d.com - Aventurine - Mr Fix It - CARGOrilla - VT-61 - Sanlik - Demolition Droid |
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 04:35 AM
|
#3 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Karachi
Posts: 16
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
|
Thnx VirtuX for liking it, but I didn't get your point what you mean by taking out Levis signage?
|
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 09:18 AM
|
#4 |
|
Registered Abuser
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Staffordshire, UK
Posts: 586
Thanks: 15
Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts
|
I think it looks a bit too current. Almost as though the Levi sign is old. It would be like having a 1950's billboard, in a 2011 scene.
You could try designing a slightly futuristic Levi sign, or any other company for that matter.
__________________
|
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 11:21 AM
|
#5 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Karachi
Posts: 16
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
|
Ok Prime got your point, well Ill try fixing the Levi signage asap, what about the rest of the environment?
|
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 11:22 AM
|
#6 |
|
Registered Abuser
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Staffordshire, UK
Posts: 586
Thanks: 15
Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts
|
It looks good, however a little confusing. You need to add some people into the environment, to help to show the sense of scale.
__________________
|
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 11:48 AM
|
#7 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Karachi
Posts: 16
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
|
Ok thn x for liking it Prime, well that will be done too in the coming update too... anything more like to say?
|
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 12:13 PM
|
#8 |
|
Registered Abuser
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Staffordshire, UK
Posts: 586
Thanks: 15
Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts
|
Possibly a more focused colour palette.
The reason the Levis sign sticks out, is because it's a warm colour, in a cool colour scheme. Use red to highlight anything you want as a focal point, though I imagine that sign was not intended as a focal point.
__________________
|
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 04:28 PM
|
#9 |
|
Victoria Passariello
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Spain
Posts: 552
Thanks: 79
Thanked 52 Times in 49 Posts
|
that is
__________________
www.vitrux3d.com - Aventurine - Mr Fix It - CARGOrilla - VT-61 - Sanlik - Demolition Droid |
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 05:08 PM
|
#10 |
|
Neil_01
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: UK
Posts: 2,013
Thanks: 171
Thanked 80 Times in 78 Posts
 |
for me.. i think the reason the levi stands out.. is because of the quality of the texture thats being used..
i mean the trademark sign doesnt fit the bit.. and the image looks like it has been really stretched out over the mesh... so it looks blotchy..
__________________
Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01 |
|
|
|
|
11-07-2011, 05:10 PM
|
#11 |
|
Neil_01
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: UK
Posts: 2,013
Thanks: 171
Thanked 80 Times in 78 Posts
|
other than that.. i'm not sure about your lighting... as the scene looks bright.. like around the car and what not.. but where are the sources of light.. i mean the sky is dark.. there are no street lights about... the neon signs.. are projecting any glows.. which cancel them out as a source... but the scene seems really bright... its weird..
__________________
Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01 |
|
|
|
|
12-07-2011, 02:49 PM
|
#12 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Karachi
Posts: 16
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
|
New Update...............
Check out the following update guys
 |
|
|
|
|
15-07-2011, 06:40 AM
|
#13 |
|
Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Karachi
Posts: 16
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
|
Waiting for more of the comments
|
|
|
|
|
15-07-2011, 04:32 PM
|
#14 |
|
Victoria Passariello
Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: Spain
Posts: 552
Thanks: 79
Thanked 52 Times in 49 Posts
|
Very cool mate... i Like it a lot
I just think that the " Ū " of the LEVIS sign should not be cut!
__________________
www.vitrux3d.com - Aventurine - Mr Fix It - CARGOrilla - VT-61 - Sanlik - Demolition Droid |
|
|
|
|
15-07-2011, 05:14 PM
|
#15 |
|
Neil_01
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: UK
Posts: 2,013
Thanks: 171
Thanked 80 Times in 78 Posts
|
yeah it should be a full circle shaped.. not cut in half..
__________________
Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01 |
|
|
|
 |
| Tags |
| environment art, maya, nuke, scifi |
| Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests) | |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
