The renders are pretty nice, but you've got several issues with the guitar itself.
There's missing frets on the neck, you're missing the nut altogether, the strings really should wrap around the tuning pegs once or twice at least [they should also be different sizes], and the pick-up heights could be adjusted to look more realistic [I'd switch the pups to a silver material like the bridge, but that's purely cosmetic and a matter of personal taste more so than any kind of actual issue].
There are also a few issues with the bridge: first, there should probably be holes on the back of the stop bar, usually on TonePros or Tune'O'Matic style bridges the strings feed thru the stop bar, second, the strings aren't touching the actual "bridge" at all, or more precisely, you're missing the saddles that the strings would sit in, and the strings don't generally run level from the stop bar to the bridge, the bridge is usually higher and the stop bar lower so that the strings stay properly seated. I know that seems like a lot of stuff, but the devil's in the details, and that's what really sets an average work apart from an amazing one.
As I said, the renders are really pretty nice, maybe a little dark, but black guitars tend to be that way, you've just got some details to fix on the guitar to make this a really nice piece.
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