Childrenbook Project

rubberduck · 30-07-2003, 12:29 AM

I got a new project going on, this time for a childrenbook.
I can't tell much about the story, secret

But I can tell that it has to do with a boy and his dream.
Here's one of the characters in it.

sarN · 30-07-2003, 01:43 AM

haha
funny little monkey...

ManiHack · 30-07-2003, 02:25 AM

I like its its very nice.
But he's a little too symmetric, you should add a flower pinned to his fur or something to break the symmetry.

rubberduck · 31-07-2003, 03:01 AM

Thank guys

Manihack: A flower?

Won't fit in the story

Here's some different "monkey" expressions

ManiHack · 31-07-2003, 04:20 AM

I dont care, if Symmetry is what you like, then I have to say you're pretty good at it.

wolfy · 31-07-2003, 01:10 PM

Theres just no stopping this man. I love the facial expressions on him. Nice set of morph targets. So is he going to a dream like sequence of a jungle or a city. Im just trying to get what your doing as its a secret dude.
Looking good so far, nice style as well.

goat · 31-07-2003, 04:32 PM

cool looking guy you got there rubberduck. I would sat try and get more variation on the eyebrows on the morphs. they kinda all look the same. keep it up

also play with the ears too!

Black_Robe · 31-07-2003, 05:59 PM

i think you should have one that looks like hes grinning like this

but in monkey language that means hes threatening or something...

RickStefani · 31-07-2003, 06:11 PM

Haha, great characture.

rubberduck · 03-08-2003, 05:31 AM

Thanks guys

Wolfy: Jungle..that's all I can say

Goat & Black Robe: I'll tweak the morphs(ears/eyebraws) some more too

Here's the main character in the story

goat · 03-08-2003, 03:39 PM

That kid looks great! Good job man. can't wait to see more. hands look a bit small. but that could be me. sweet so far. the area around his legs/hips looks like they are seprate from his body. are they supose to be wrinkles? looks good!

rubberduck · 03-08-2003, 08:03 PM

Thanks Goat

Yes, they're supposed to be wrinkles
I'll check on the hands, it may just be the camera angle?

rubberduck · 04-08-2003, 02:57 AM

Building/modeling furniture for the boy's bedroom and tweaked some more on the monkey morphs too

rubberduck · 04-08-2003, 02:58 AM

And the monkey morphs

kuman · 04-08-2003, 03:31 AM

really cool man,

i dig the kid a lot, no crits there. plus damn i love monkeys. my only crit there is that the mouth forms in your morphs seem kinda blocky along the lip lines. the first render has a much softer mouth form it seams, i think that a bit of interesting curvature and mis balance between the two sides would add a life to those forms.

looking forward to catchin your progress

-k

30-07-2003, 12:29 AM	#1
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Childrenbook Project I got a new project going on, this time for a childrenbook. I can't tell much about the story, secret But I can tell that it has to do with a boy and his dream. Here's one of the characters in it. Attached Images __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

30-07-2003, 02:25 AM	#3
ManiHack Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Ubisoft Montreal Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	crit I like its its very nice. But he's a little too symmetric, you should add a flower pinned to his fur or something to break the symmetry.

31-07-2003, 03:01 AM	#4
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank guys Manihack: A flower? Won't fit in the story Here's some different "monkey" expressions Attached Images __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

31-07-2003, 01:10 PM	#6
wolfy Dumb ass ruler Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: uk kent Posts: 70 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Theres just no stopping this man. I love the facial expressions on him. Nice set of morph targets. So is he going to a dream like sequence of a jungle or a city. Im just trying to get what your doing as its a secret dude. Looking good so far, nice style as well. __________________ your dumb ass friend wolfy

31-07-2003, 04:32 PM	#7
goat Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Boston, Ma Posts: 832 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	cool looking guy you got there rubberduck. I would sat try and get more variation on the eyebrows on the morphs. they kinda all look the same. keep it up also play with the ears too! __________________ http://www.jumpinmyhead.com/frontpage.html

30-07-2003, 01:43 AM	#2
sarN Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Massachusetts, USA Posts: 2,238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	haha funny little monkey...

31-07-2003, 04:20 AM	#5
ManiHack Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Ubisoft Montreal Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I dont care, if Symmetry is what you like, then I have to say you're pretty good at it.

31-07-2003, 05:59 PM	#8
Black_Robe I 4re t3h \|)rumm0r Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Scotland Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i think you should have one that looks like hes grinning like this but in monkey language that means hes threatening or something... __________________ Listening to: Led Zeppelin - No Quarter

31-07-2003, 06:11 PM	#9
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Haha, great characture. __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

03-08-2003, 05:31 AM	#10
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks guys Wolfy: Jungle..that's all I can say Goat & Black Robe: I'll tweak the morphs(ears/eyebraws) some more too Here's the main character in the story Attached Images __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

03-08-2003, 03:39 PM	#11
goat Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Boston, Ma Posts: 832 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That kid looks great! Good job man. can't wait to see more. hands look a bit small. but that could be me. sweet so far. the area around his legs/hips looks like they are seprate from his body. are they supose to be wrinkles? looks good! __________________ http://www.jumpinmyhead.com/frontpage.html

03-08-2003, 08:03 PM	#12
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks Goat Yes, they're supposed to be wrinkles I'll check on the hands, it may just be the camera angle? __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

04-08-2003, 02:57 AM	#13
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Building/modeling furniture for the boy's bedroom and tweaked some more on the monkey morphs too Attached Images __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

04-08-2003, 02:58 AM	#14
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	And the monkey morphs Attached Images __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

04-08-2003, 03:31 AM	#15
kuman Fishscale Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Venice Beach Posts: 831 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	really cool man, i dig the kid a lot, no crits there. plus damn i love monkeys. my only crit there is that the mouth forms in your morphs seem kinda blocky along the lip lines. the first render has a much softer mouth form it seams, i think that a bit of interesting curvature and mis balance between the two sides would add a life to those forms. looking forward to catchin your progress -k __________________ -CG Porfolio-

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