Handy Woman - low poly - critique

goose247 · 07-08-2003, 09:57 PM

Just wondering if i could get some professional criticism on
my girl character. I'd like to rig/animate her soon. (and texture of course)

lockdown2000 · 07-08-2003, 11:32 PM

It is very nice model. How many polygons. You could rework the hands I think. Make them have fingers instead of one big blob

In any case, with a simple face texture this character is pretty darn nice.

goose247 · 08-08-2003, 02:32 AM

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Originally posted by lockdown2000
It is very nice model. How many polygons. You could rework the hands I think. Make them have fingers instead of one big blob In any case, with a simple face texture this character is pretty darn nice.

Hey, thanks! I'm actually redoing the hands. I thought I could get away with doing mitts instead of fingers and just texturing them.

The model at the moment is 1680 polys/faces, but there is some unnecessary polys on the seam of the pants and the belt as well as the shoes.. so, I say I could get it down to about 1500 or so. I’ll post a textured version later.

lockdown2000 · 08-08-2003, 03:45 AM

That pretty darn low, very nice.
It may be the lighting, but the legs seems rather flat and boxy.

goose247 · 08-08-2003, 07:21 PM

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Originally posted by lockdown2000
That pretty darn low, very nice.
It may be the lighting, but the legs seems rather flat and boxy.

The legs are relatively round. It's cause of the smoothed edges. (smoothing groups)

I am not that happy with the head,. but the hands are okay...

What do you think?

blackroot · 19-08-2003, 05:42 PM

Hey Goose,
Looks great, i love the style. The only thing i noticed is you need to turn some polys at the knees to make them look right. Other than that depending on how close the model is going to be on screen mits for hands are good.
How many polys are you at?
Keep up the good work.

goose247 · 24-08-2003, 04:48 AM

Thanks! Ya, i guess the knees could use some more tweeking.

And about the hands., I suppose it I could get away with mitts, If I was actually using it for a game.. it's just for fun at the moment.

the poly count is approx 1500.

Quote:

Originally posted by blackroot
Hey Goose,
Looks great, i love the style. The only thing i noticed is you need to turn some polys at the knees to make them look right. Other than that depending on how close the model is going to be on screen mits for hands are good.
How many polys are you at?
Keep up the good work.

Downup · 24-08-2003, 05:01 PM

yeah i like it very much great work

07-08-2003, 09:57 PM	#1
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Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah i like it very much great work __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

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07-08-2003, 11:32 PM	#2
lockdown2000 Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It is very nice model. How many polygons. You could rework the hands I think. Make them have fingers instead of one big blob In any case, with a simple face texture this character is pretty darn nice.

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lockdown2000 Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That pretty darn low, very nice. It may be the lighting, but the legs seems rather flat and boxy.

19-08-2003, 05:42 PM	#6
blackroot Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Ca Posts: 83 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey Goose, Looks great, i love the style. The only thing i noticed is you need to turn some polys at the knees to make them look right. Other than that depending on how close the model is going to be on screen mits for hands are good. How many polys are you at? Keep up the good work.

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