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Tiger1313 · 10-08-2003, 12:59 PM

Hello!This is my firt post on this forum, and because I'm a Polish member, please forgive my poor English

I hope you'll enjoy my artwork. This is my first art:

RBL · 10-08-2003, 02:38 PM

Hmm... The art express the author feelings.
Pretty good CG. I like the light of near characters. But the colors seems too saturated and the sky is confusing. If I hadn´t red the title i´ll cofuse it with an arson scene.

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Michael · 12-08-2003, 08:03 AM

Welcome to the forums.

He... nareszcie ktoœ z Polski...

Ja da³bym trochê wiêcej rozmycia w tle, postaci i s³upy mog³yby traciæ na czerni id¹c wg³¹b ilustracji.... To da³oby uczucie g³êbi. Poza tym troszkê brak konsekwencji w œwiat³ocieniu - postaæ po lewej ma szare ramiê, gdzie powinien byæ cieñ. Ale kolory super. Wysy³aj wiêcej.

Translation :

Heh... finally someone from Poland...

I would give a bit more blur in the background, the people and pillars could loose some blackness when going into the illustration... This would give the feeling of depth. Furthermore there's a bit of inconsequence in light/shadow casting - the character on the left has a grey arm, where should be shade. But colour are super. Post some more.

Tiger1313 · 07-09-2003, 11:44 PM

Heh here's last update.It has taken the 3rd place on "2d battle" on max3d.pl on Polish cg competition

10-08-2003, 12:59 PM	#1
Tiger1313 Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Gdynia - Poland Posts: 25 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	A(Free)KA Hello!This is my firt post on this forum, and because I'm a Polish member, please forgive my poor English I hope you'll enjoy my artwork. This is my first art: Attached Images __________________ eyestruggle.com Last edited by Tiger1313; 11-08-2003 at 01:37 PM..

10-08-2003, 02:38 PM	#2
RBL Taking things seriously. Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Asturias!!! Posts: 468 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Hmm... The art express the author feelings. Pretty good CG. I like the light of near characters. But the colors seems too saturated and the sky is confusing. If I hadn´t red the title i´ll cofuse it with an arson scene. It began in: A FREE K A __________________ Do not start anything you aren´t going to finish. --->RBL.es<--- DW IV entry: 3D - Demon Prince - "Paradox"

12-08-2003, 08:03 AM	#3
Michael Lone Brushboy Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Poland Posts: 711 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Welcome to the forums. He... nareszcie ktoœ z Polski... Ja da³bym trochê wiêcej rozmycia w tle, postaci i s³upy mog³yby traciæ na czerni id¹c wg³¹b ilustracji.... To da³oby uczucie g³êbi. Poza tym troszkê brak konsekwencji w œwiat³ocieniu - postaæ po lewej ma szare ramiê, gdzie powinien byæ cieñ. Ale kolory super. Wysy³aj wiêcej. Translation : Heh... finally someone from Poland... I would give a bit more blur in the background, the people and pillars could loose some blackness when going into the illustration... This would give the feeling of depth. Furthermore there's a bit of inconsequence in light/shadow casting - the character on the left has a grey arm, where should be shade. But colour are super. Post some more. __________________ My CG Portfolio

07-09-2003, 11:44 PM	#4
Tiger1313 Registered User Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Gdynia - Poland Posts: 25 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Heh here's last update.It has taken the 3rd place on "2d battle" on max3d.pl on Polish cg competition __________________ eyestruggle.com Last edited by Tiger1313; 22-09-2003 at 01:00 AM..

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