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Old 13-08-2005, 10:52 AM   #1
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Cool [B]My Mermaid (Aquangel)[/B]

Hi Folks,
I have just tryed to make a mermaid I hope you like it.I am having a whole story in my mind but I think it will take a long time.It took me about 10 days to model her.and since the day I am planning to model her I am feeling as my self as a mermaid.

C&C are MOST welcome...

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Old 13-08-2005, 11:10 AM   #2
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Here a closer look at the face....
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Old 13-08-2005, 08:14 PM   #3
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nice, i think her nose is too thin and that her tail is too thick. maybe make the tail longer and thinner
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Old 15-08-2005, 12:50 PM   #4
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thax sharky...
her tail is already thin may be i will post here the side view to clarify and ya i agree for the nose...
but let me see weather it looks good by long tail or not...!
Any ways Thax again.
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Old 15-08-2005, 02:02 PM   #5
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Maybe Sharky meant: too wide? I think the tail should be a bit narrower. But this is more like a dolphin tail . If you ment it to look like a golden fishes tail, then it looks allright. Upper arms also a little too thick. Your doing great job, carry on!

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Old 15-08-2005, 02:47 PM   #6
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thax for the appreciation Runneri !
actually u r right I m making it as a dolphin tail caz it would be easy to animate...
And u r right may be if it would be narowwer it woul look better but see that by narrowing the propotions would get odd. then i have to alongate it too....
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Old 17-08-2005, 12:07 PM   #7
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No more comments !!!
R all others dont wanna say any thing ???
come on ,,, say some thing if u cant say bad say it good or average... Its my first organic model and I need to have best comments !!!
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Old 23-08-2005, 03:53 PM   #8
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well i think the ear has some fault in it :-)
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Old 26-08-2005, 04:47 PM   #9
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thax for ur post Theeman.
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Arrow Update!!

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Hey Raja,

Nice work going on!
I think the face should be fuller. The forhead and brows look a bit weird and the whole head looks quite long. The lips also look like they're pushed a bit too far. The ear looks a bit too thick and should be rotated inward more. The cheeks lifted and fuller.

I wanted to do a paint over for you, but I really can't paint at the moment, so you'll get that one later
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Old 29-08-2005, 06:03 PM   #12
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texturing completed....
comments plz
i cant see the pic....
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Old 29-08-2005, 08:06 PM   #13
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thax shiroii :: Its nice to see you in my thread.It's after a long a time I saw you.hope u be fine.
Actually it was my first human character so there were lots of issues of anatomy at the first ..first I studied a bit of human anatomy and then I be able to make that.then the mesh flow was another problem...I tried to handled that thing too.
shiroii ! tell me one thing i have unwraped my character and almost texture painting is complete.. Can i change it at this stage? becuse up to my knowledga people say, Dont touch any vertex or u will lose the unwrap and u have to do it from the scratch...bla bla bla..... Is it true????

skripturez!!! I m sorry I uploaded the pic but may it lost somewhere.. here I upload it again..Thax for viewing my mermaid..
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the best way to get the mesh flow is to see the portfolio of vancover art students and try to immitate it :-)i always watch te tyler baron demo reel.i hope u have seen nalu demo(is a mermaid) of nvidia .it is a graphics demo of geforce 6.like dawn(is a fairy) was for geforce 5.u can download their videos or pics from here http://www.nzone.com/object/nzone_downloads_nvidia.html. hay if u want to make it spacefairing it must have fins made of solar sails and gill that absorb nebula gass and convert it to oxygen or something:-).
keep modeling aand keep updating
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