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Old 09-02-2009, 10:29 AM   #25
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your perspective on the church ledge tower just below the 3 windows is a bit off - I saw it pretty quickly cos it throws off the nice fisheye effect.


There's just a couple of things I think you should maybe try.

one : perhaps get some more extreme perspective into the character - to me her feet should be pulled away more (if that makes any sense - so they look smaller)

two : perhaps shift her downwards in the frame slightly or extend the image at the bottom- there's space there that isn't really committed to anything.
it'd be really nice to see the front faces of buildings coming up towards the camera at the bottom


just thoughts
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