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Old 07-06-2008, 08:56 PM   #1
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Multi story building

hi..

this is my first post here..

Her is the render of a multi story building....
Designed by me....( i m student of architecture)

Modeled in 3ds Max and rendered with Vray 1.5... render time: 31 min.

Comments and Critics are Welcome....

Suggestions also...

I hope u people like it....
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Old 08-06-2008, 05:41 PM   #2
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I like everything regarding your design, exept using stairs to the entrance. If you must use stairs, then they should be alot wider. Main entrance should allow people going in and out without a hassle. You designed the building so you know how many people could a normal day fit inside. How long time would it take to get all the people out with an emergency. Maybe a fire on the top floor or something. Doesnt matter if you you have a fire exit somewhere. The main entrance is the most importent anyway, all the people who whent inside know how to find their way out, using the very same route.

Pillar and columns make it look massive, I like the glass panels as well. A parking lot under the house is maybe an overkill. The area cant be big enough to pay that extra, regarding building cost. Area minus ramps, heating and cooling systems etc cant be big enough for two cars, or?

Anyway, the looks is cool
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Old 09-06-2008, 06:53 AM   #3
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thanx for everything Sir....

This building has 4 basement car parking... And the fire exit is at the back side...I agree with the front stairs....It should be wider But its still 7 feet wider in the center a stairs to lower ground ....


Thanks for suggestion....and for liking...these suggestions r very helpful..

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Old 10-06-2008, 06:17 AM   #4
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I like this piece and agree with the comment already stated. But ... the cars ... they are just really distracting to me. I would take them out or just have them parked and be a neutral color.
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Old 10-06-2008, 08:00 AM   #5
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I like the render but two things need a little bit work. The cars (like mentioned before), and the striped curb in the middle of the road seams out of place. Other than that it's nice render.
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Old 10-06-2008, 09:39 AM   #6
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Remove the cars and curb, and fix the aliasing issue on the image and you have a very beautifully lit and shaded building rendering !
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Old 10-06-2008, 10:53 AM   #7
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I have to agree on the curbs and cars. The birds aren't very convincing, either. The building itself looks very nice
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thanx to everyone.......
for passing comment on my work it really help me to improve.....
Thank u again

Please always comment on my future works also....
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Old 11-06-2008, 11:47 AM   #9
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very nice rendering .
I like it
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thanx for liking...

Question:

How to submit the artwork to 3total gallery....

plzzzz...
Ad how to get any kind of award...

plzzzz answer these questions...i will b waiting
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