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Old 04-07-2008, 06:57 PM   #1
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Im working in an archviz proyect and i need your critiques.
Its a modern architecture project of houses in a park. Ive some troubles with the many fine cables on the cam2 giving some moire in renders, and i know ilumiantion its too plane specially in cam3 render.

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Old 04-07-2008, 07:46 PM   #2
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Where's Cam2?

Do you need modelling crits or render crits?
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Old 05-07-2008, 12:53 AM   #3
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hi JajeBlade, i need crits in general, but i hope the model its about ok.

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lighting is too strong, are you using an exposure shader?

and about the stairs... are they supported just by the wall?
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Hi Shadow Wolf, the thing is that im doing some light tests, and i realize that you are right light is too strong. I will change that, as well i didnt realize that problem with that stairs, so i will solve that as well.

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I will try to add some trees to get a better composition, coz this house is located in a park.
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nice man, but hey, do not forget to use an exposure shader on your camera, without it you wont get a realistic feeling.
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