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Old 11-11-2009, 09:57 AM   #16
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Thanks a lot washka.
Soon Ill update the image.
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Old 11-11-2009, 12:46 PM   #17
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Ok, I think now I have all I need
to Iagos scene. Now I just have
to paint the details, refine shapes,
etc.



I thought really hard to get here,
but I am pretty happy with the
results until now.

Hope you like it.

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Old 11-11-2009, 01:04 PM   #18
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I really like the action and energy of this composition (and I'll stay away from the nose picking jokes ). I also like how you made the hero much beefier than the first sketches.

You could add a little more depth to your scene by having the giant push his left hand even closer to the camera.

You've got great intensity on your hero's face and also good anguish on the giant. This shot really does a nice job of capturing the moment just before the fatal blow that you can feel is coming.

Can't wait to see how it progresses.
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Old 11-11-2009, 02:44 PM   #19
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He has Akuma, face sweet.
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I totally agree with AbdulttheNewt. The composition is quite dynamic and explosive. Any idea of what you're going to put in the background?
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Hey guys,

Thanks a lot for the comments and suggestions.


washka: Thanks man. I wanted him more humanized, you know...
M_Cederstrom: I guess he is a distant cousin of Akuma, haha...
AbdultheNewt: He is grabbing Iagos right leg, haha... How can I improve that, to make it look more convincent? I think Ill also try the closer to the camera version you suggested.
zanman:I thought of some smoke and clouds, a very intense sun light and maybe a wall of rocks, like a canyon, with a few secondary characters watching the final battle. What do you think?

Ive started roughing out the colors, but I guess that I still need to change some details first...



Hope you like it.
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Old 11-11-2009, 03:47 PM   #22
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M_Cederstrom: I guess he is a distant cousin of Akuma, haha...
That work for me
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Old 12-11-2009, 01:54 AM   #23
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Todays latest update. I am
so tired, gotta go to sleep...






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Old 12-11-2009, 07:33 AM   #24
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nice work.
I liked that pulse around the arm, but it seems you've let that idea go...
You could try folding his two outer fingers, like he is bracing for the punch!
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uuu realy cool buddy , an idea from me you can make the scene darker and the hole in his hand to have some strong light, the same for those lines on the hand, plus you can make highlights on the monster body where that light should be casting i think it will make the scene look more dramatic (hope i spell it right ), aniway this will be a cool scene, good job
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Old 12-11-2009, 12:45 PM   #26
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hmm nice

i agree wth everyone about the bg. and i like j.b.'s idea too.

when i frst took a look at this page i thot that u made a goku and space ghost fusion lol.

but hes looking great right now.

for bg , may be show them fighting on dojo grounds or near ruins.
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Old 12-11-2009, 02:19 PM   #27
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aby arty: Haha... Thanks man. I guess Ill keep the ruins as bg.
J.B.: I agree. Since Im not a pro, Ill take care of the GI at the end. And the hole will have a really bright shine, great idea.
hulahuga: After of taking care of GI, will be SFXs time, haha...

Thank you all for your great and kind suggestions, and for keeping motivating me, really.
Heres another update. Slowly, but always, thats what I say! Haha...




Hope you like it.

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Old 12-11-2009, 02:46 PM   #28
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I really like how this is coming along. One composition (again, me with the depth comment) suggestion would be the coincidental line between his left leg and the giant's shoulder. I'd recommend bringing the knee in front and pushing the shoulder behind.

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Old 12-11-2009, 03:02 PM   #29
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Great tip! Thanks


Ill make it better, but
heres a last update by
now.




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Old 12-11-2009, 06:06 PM   #30
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This guy kind of "ate" some alien technology, hehe...





PS.: Gonna be out for a few days, because of work.

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