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Old 05-05-2009, 10:42 PM   #16
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Impressive work. I really like how the weapon and some of the armor detail stand out. I see 2 areas that look like they could use a little fork.

First, the minor fix, her neck: The shading and structure of he neck seems a little vague, it doesn't look like a rounded or anatomical structure, it kinda seems like a block of flesh colored space connecting her head to her body, and because you've drawn it so long that's a lot of space taken up by a blob.

Second is the feet, I'm not as clear on what needs to be done here to fix it, but her feet don't seem to be weighted down on the ground, it might be a shading thing, where rather than just shading under the feet, which gives an impression that we can see under it, maybe there could be some slight reflected light from the ground. But to me what looks like a big part of it is that 'her' left foot is turned slightly awkwardly, like she's slightly pigeon toed. With the positioning of her leg it seems like if we can see either side of her foot it should probably be the inside, and not the outside.

Hope this was more helpful than discouraging, overall i thing the work is great just a few tweaks could make it more sound.
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Old 06-05-2009, 02:30 AM   #17
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no man its very helpful. i was thinking that something looked off about the neck and feet i'll have to try to fix those up. thanks for the heads up though.
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Old 06-05-2009, 05:53 AM   #18
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Dude, that's an awesome painting.
So where's the character model sheet? Just a couple days left ya know.
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Old 15-05-2009, 09:28 AM   #19
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I think this one is really cool, I like it a lot
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Old 15-05-2009, 10:10 AM   #20
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Wow... I like this one very much! Your drawing skills are pretty impressive. I hope to see your entry finished this weekend?
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