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Old 01-04-2011, 09:06 PM   #121
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Did a quick paintover of Amanda Seyfried's face to give you some construction comparison to go by when correcting the face.

Choose her specifically because her primary lines are far from a picture perfect construction model, so you should get some idea of what you can tweak to get a more youthful face. Plus, she has one of those unique faces that already looks stylized.

I also put in a couple light landmarks to look for, but nailing the facial triangle should be your primary goal.

If you can block these shapes relationships a little better, then go in and start refining the details, you should see some dramatic improvements.

A few things to fix on your model:
- Cheeks are too high up.
- Aside from being wider, the nose needs to go up more into the eye region. Right now it's starting on the same line as the lower eyes making it look way off.
- The mustache region (idk what else to call it) sinks in too much, push it out some.
- Get those eyebrows arching further up, nothing sells a womanly face more.

There is definitely more, but this should be a good starting point. I'm sure a lot you can pickup on from just the picture.

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Old 01-04-2011, 10:00 PM   #122
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washka: clothing is coming up! found a lots of good jewels and stuff to make.. I think I'll take stuff from the East

Warlock 279: Thanks! Ur right, I'll look into that!

Crispy4004: wow man, great help! I'll get working by this right away
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Old 02-04-2011, 11:57 AM   #123
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so trying to make the face better ...
wanted to post this up before moving up subdivisions

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Old 02-04-2011, 01:31 PM   #124
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Here is a quick paint over with a few proportional corrections, and other changes I would make:
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Old 02-04-2011, 01:33 PM   #125
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looking great but for me i think jaw is too wide and thats what is throwing the proportions off keep up this amazing work
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Old 02-04-2011, 01:33 PM   #126
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ha crispy noticed it b4 me
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Old 02-04-2011, 11:21 PM   #127
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Body props of da girl starts to stabilize nicely.
You want something human looking, or?

I visited le Louvre two years ago, you can make some lovely "encounter" there, did some interesting photos too.
Here's some lovely accompanied dog, lucky dog.
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Crispy4004: Thanks again for the input! Gonna use this, and try fix her up!

liquidbear: thanks! gonna fix that

washka: cool photo! I was thinking about two butterfly shaped (or just something that flies) blue spirit circling around the head of the sitting goddess, but these dog is kinda sweet to. But she will definitely have company Thanks!
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Old 03-04-2011, 04:47 AM   #129
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my only real problem with your model.. is her ass.. it looks too nice.. if you know what i mean.. no womans ass looks that smooth and round and what not.. there is always something shapely about it.. if you know what i mean..

otherwise cool thread.. looking forward to see the final..
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Old 03-04-2011, 11:26 AM   #130
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Old 04-04-2011, 08:06 PM   #131
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Neil_F01: Thanks! She is a god, she can have a perfect butt

yangkang: thanks!

boobs will be fixed, since I modeled them "hanging" and now I realize they will be covered so their shape will be a little bit more rounded. first ides with the clothing... wanna make the back to show lot of her, because I think thats a surprising element in a turntable video, when you would expect her backside to be covered as much as the front, and she uncovered
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Old 04-04-2011, 08:42 PM   #132
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Are those complements some king of lotus flower? Good point on the surprise factor there Great tanga!

I took a look at the techno nurse on the Making of's in the main site in order to fix my anatomy, the volume on the arms add a lot of "movement and action" feeling to the sculpt even on the base pose. It's worth taking a look.

Anyway, it might look strange in a younger body, your decision!

I like this wip a lot, great ideas and tips.
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can you link the making of? I can't find it

in the hair it was based on a lotus yes, but I wasn't following it strictly, added some jewels and stuff. The necklace is some kind of a flower/sun symbol.. just made it, and I think I'll stick to it

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Old 05-04-2011, 12:15 AM   #134
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Here you go! http://www.3dtotal.com/tutorial/3d_s...hanurse_01.php

One of my faves!
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Jewelry in her butt crack. It had to happen. It was the only logical choice, huh?



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