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Old 16-03-2011, 08:53 PM   #1
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Dominance War V - 3D - Goddess of Duel - DeoxyWater

First time join the Dom-War. So ready to rock!!!

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Old 18-03-2011, 03:36 PM   #2
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Ok, what i have in mind right now is the character is the first generation of cyborg that get throw into the war. Most mechine part are like armour wear by human female. Design for 1 by 1 battle. Mostly using sword. After die as a legendary warrior, her spirit was "promoted" to become one of the goddess - the goddess of duel. Her body was able to upgrade to another level by having the god like power.


That is what I have so far, and I also have some drawing....
Sorry if my poor English bothers anyone.
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Old 18-03-2011, 03:38 PM   #3
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This is the drawing I have right now.

I want her to looks like she is fast and light.
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Old 20-03-2011, 09:44 PM   #4
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I finished some more drawings.
I took the photo with my phone, so sorry about the quality of the picture.


I am going to fix the proportion and re-draw it in PC sometime this week, and hopefully can start the modeling soon.



Btw, does anyone know how to change the name of the thread, I don't want to leave it as "TBA". Thanks.
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Old 20-03-2011, 09:52 PM   #5
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Looks interesting. Watch your proportions tho, you've got the head, and legs a bit out of whack at the moment. I like where you're heading with the armor.

To get your thread name changed, you need to PM BigToe, about it. Include in the PM, a link to your thread so he doesn't have to hunt it down, and what you'd like him to change the thread title to.
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Old 20-03-2011, 09:55 PM   #6
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nice idea, a god of duels expert at dingle combat is going to be a fun one to do.

Duels are often fought for honour, so it would be cool to get that feeling into the character's design, Duels were also a part of the culture in 16th 17th centruy and could be a really interesting feel to introduce a few design elements from that period into the armour designs

good luck! I would think you could send a pm to BigToe to get thread name changed to your liking
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Old 20-03-2011, 11:52 PM   #7
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Thanks for the comment, and I will work on the proportion when I do the digital drawing of this. It is hard to manage the space on paper, I start with the head, and I find no more space for the feet. lol Also, thanks for tell me how to change the thread name.


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Thanks for the comment, but I really want it to be the style of close future. The 16th 17th century idea is actually pretty cool, and I might add some element of that into my weapons. And also, thanks for tell me how to change the thread name.
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Old 21-03-2011, 02:15 AM   #8
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Definitely some cool details on her. As a Goddess of Duals, one would expect elegance yet strength. Think the Amazonian warrior women from that island that Wonder Woman comes from.

I think even though it's futuristic, doesn't mean it has to be straight lines and mechanical. Adding some sexy curved designs to contour her sexy body will give her a more Goddess like qualities.
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Old 21-03-2011, 01:59 PM   #9
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Since Curved design will take more tris than straight lines, I am really afraid I will run out of tris for low-poly model, so I keep it low as I can. But I will think about it, thanks for the comment.
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nice concept, loving the armor details for her.

curves arnt as much an issue as sharp pointy angles for low poly IMO
last years winners definately had some nice curvy shapes going on...
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Old 22-03-2011, 07:21 PM   #11
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Thanks for the comments, I will try adding some more curvy shapes when I do the modeling.
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Old 22-03-2011, 07:28 PM   #12
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The digital concept drawing is settle, and while I am doing the modeling, I will add/change some of the design according to the comments.

One more time, thanks for all the comments



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Proportions look much much better. For some reason I want to see something on her face/head, maybe an eye patch. Tho I'm not really sure that suits the character. So perhaps a head/hair band of some sort. Looks good anyway.
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Old 22-03-2011, 09:50 PM   #14
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Oh man, your first black & white sketch, are you from the secret splotcher congregation too? Simple and efficient.

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Old 22-03-2011, 10:18 PM   #15
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I have been thinking about adding something to the face for awhile......cannot think of anything, maybe an eye patch is a good idea, like the Metal Gear Solid 4 one. Don't know yet.

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I always think a lot before drawing, maybe that is why it is efficient. But I don't quite get what you mean the first part. Is it mean it is dirty?! lol
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