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Old 01-04-2011, 08:27 PM   #31
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Sorry for the slow updating, some family issue....

Here are some screenshots of the leg, not totally finish yet.
I will be working on the torso after the leg, so the proportion won't be off.
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Old 01-04-2011, 08:31 PM   #32
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Nice design man, hot, keep it up!
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Old 07-04-2011, 07:00 PM   #33
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Here is the newest update. I finished the torso and working on the head right now.


Need comments about the porprotion of the torso....
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Old 07-04-2011, 07:37 PM   #34
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Things you could fix:
-Lower part of thoracic cage (use nude references).
-Larger hips (except if you want a childish look) and belly.

Pffff I miss the tits, Big-Toe won't be happy...
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Old 07-04-2011, 08:19 PM   #35
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Thoracic cage fixed, hips will be covered by armour and also I am not a fan of big hips....lol
Tits for VIP only. lol Thanks for the help.
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Old 07-04-2011, 08:53 PM   #36
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- I am not a fan of big hips....lol
ahhhhhh maaan. no big buts? watch this . maybe you'll change your mind .

but everything else looks good . ceep it up.

P.S. dont forget big buts and big tits
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Old 07-04-2011, 09:13 PM   #37
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Aaaah DeoxyWater, even if I respect your tastes, you'll never understand the Big B B B...

But hopefully there is tons of things to understand in da world.
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Old 07-04-2011, 10:54 PM   #38
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I almost got convinced by you guys. lol
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Old 08-04-2011, 01:03 AM   #39
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Here is the face.........


That's it for today
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Old 08-04-2011, 06:33 AM   #40
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Legs and stuff look good. I think she could use a few more curves in the torso, but I'll hold off on that till you put it together a little more.

The face needs some proportion tweaks I think. Something like this...



The features of the face look pretty good in and of themselves [well except that schnauz; she needs a cute little nose to fit your concept sketch] they just need pushed around a little bit.
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Old 08-04-2011, 09:12 AM   #41
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With Warlock 279's changes the head looks just ready :P The boots just rocks, If we may expect the same level at the rest of the body this will be a nice mecha thing for sure. Something I wouldn't like dueling
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Old 08-04-2011, 04:41 PM   #42
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Thanks for the tweaks, that helps a lot, I will make the change later today. I don't get what you mean by "use a few more curves in the torso".

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Thanks, I will try to keep the rest of the body same level of detail.
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Old 08-04-2011, 11:28 PM   #43
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Just saw this and made me upset...
http://www.leewiart.com/forum/topic/1-45381



Well, anyway, the only thing I can do to beat that is to work harder...
Here is the new face. Fixed according to the opinions.
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Old 09-04-2011, 12:07 AM   #44
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Hahaha, ya, those LeewiArt folks are soul crushingly good sometimes. Gotta watch the Russians with the tech bits as well, some crazy mechanical modeling people over there as well.

Face looks much much better now.

As far as "more curves" in the torso, I just meant the same thing as the washka and paulius, more hips and butt, like you said tho, she'll have armor and such, so I wouldn't worry about it now. I'm sure we'll harass later if she's still looking a little too thin in the hips once you get the armor and such on there.
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Old 09-04-2011, 12:54 AM   #45
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People going crazy on hard-surface modeling this year....lol
I won't worry about she is too thin right now, I more worry about with the armour, she will be too fatty. My cousin said she looks fat when he saw the concept drawing.
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