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Old 09-04-2011, 03:36 AM   #46
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I wouldn't say fat maybe plump, but don't sweat that now though. It's more important to get your model roughly blocked in then worrying about the small details.
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Old 09-04-2011, 04:08 PM   #47
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Old 10-04-2011, 03:43 PM   #48
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Thanks for the comments, I will build up the whole thing first and then do porprotion check.

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The "upset" only last for 2 seconds....lol The war is not over yet!!!!!!!!
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Old 11-04-2011, 11:08 PM   #49
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Here are some screenshots for the latest update.
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Old 14-04-2011, 10:55 PM   #50
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I just finished modeling the arms, hands, and the hair shape....

I put everything together to do another proportion check before moving on...
kind of worry about the head is too small
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Old 20-04-2011, 11:05 PM   #51
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Here are some new update....busy busy this week


Anyway, I finished high-poly body and next will be working on weapons and low-poly modeling.
After the proportion check, I decided to make the head a bit bigger, so it is like 10% bigger than the early version.


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Old 20-04-2011, 11:06 PM   #52
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Old 21-04-2011, 09:20 PM   #53
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That bar under her breasts being angular, kinda grabs my attention, might be better if it had some curve to it so it fit her a little better. Otherwise, looks really good.

Are her hands maybe a touch on the small side? Can't tell if it just looks that way because of the armor or not.
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Old 22-04-2011, 01:03 PM   #54
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Thanks for the comments, I will do some changes to the bar under the breast. For the hand, it might seens to be small due to the light color part at the tips, but I will check the size.
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Old 23-04-2011, 08:28 AM   #55
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Wow, impressive design, hot look.
I'm not a big fan of the hand part, those need more "powa".
For stockings, I've seen so much of those that I'm bored to death, sexy but doesn't fit (subjective opinion), I would dig some military mood with all this equipment or a warrior mood. (This last one is a 50 cent comment, majority could looove stockings)
A sexy belly could help. Some weapon? Dig more the "helmet".
If you have the time later try some RIG/posing, so she moves a bit (interpenetration).
Amazing work and great entry so far, really, keep it up!
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Old 23-04-2011, 03:03 PM   #56
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I want the hands to be more clean so it won't pull away the focus point on weapons, but since you mention it is too simple, I will work on it more when I do texture.
For stockings, during the time I draw the concept, I thought it will be cool, but now I kind of feel the same of what you said, I will do some change to it.
Poses will be the last thing I worry about, I will get to it, but not now.
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Finished the low-poly modeling and UV....

Here is some test render using Marmoset toobag (First time using it and I love it)


Still some issue with the Normal map when I combine them.....might fix it tomorrow.
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weird seam fixed.....Ready for some color now!!!!
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Color map and glow map are done...working on specular amp right now....

Glad the deadline got moved back, I can finished it by 16th, but right now I get some time to double check everything display okay or not.



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Finally finished....

Thanks for everyone who provided opinions and comments.

This is the last update for this WIP page....
Enjoy!!!! And Thanks for the attention!!!


(PS: I learned so much and had so much fun during this 2 months, and I totally cannot wait for the next war, if there is one. I am happy for what I got but still think I can do better after what I learned during this period. Once again, thanks for everyone.)
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