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Old 03-04-2011, 01:31 PM   #31
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It's just an idea, you can trash those when you really want to go your way.

Nice update!
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Old 04-04-2011, 05:45 AM   #32
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wow those concepts are really good!
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Old 04-04-2011, 02:33 PM   #33
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Cool

Cool concept!!!
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Old 04-04-2011, 03:34 PM   #34
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Loving the last concept Great work with the brushes here!
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Old 04-04-2011, 05:39 PM   #35
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Awesome. I love those colors.
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Old 05-04-2011, 09:59 AM   #36
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Love The work!!!

I like how kept the concept of her floating, you gave a strong industrial influence, maybe the extension on the outside can be more simplified and organic? kind of a circular pattern of organic-industrial-organic?
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Old 06-04-2011, 01:11 AM   #37
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Don't hide her right arm with the cloth so much, I can barely see it and it is intergral in understanding the image. Great progress. Glad we nudged you.
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Old 06-04-2011, 03:39 AM   #38
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Looks great, no crits I'd just love to see more. Playing up on the scale I think is going bring a lot more power to this piece as the viewer realizes that this character is gigantic.
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Old 09-04-2011, 07:30 PM   #39
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Old 09-04-2011, 07:37 PM   #40
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Hot stuff man, amazing work. More lightning to emphasize the chara (Upper part robot and ovale background). Somes down big foreground element for depth?
Some lill' glow elements on mechanic part, or push a bit lill' specular to attract the eye up, you know: lilltle lightnings there.
You could also try some sides lightning to detach mechanic part from the background.
Some more work onto background and girl, and some scale elements (+1 about Puckducker's comment).

Those are just ideas/tracks.

Keep it up, great entry so far!
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Old 09-04-2011, 09:10 PM   #41
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this thing is EEEPIC, loving the scale of it among many other things. keep at it, great great stuff!
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Old 17-04-2011, 05:07 PM   #42
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Old 17-04-2011, 07:28 PM   #43
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Old 18-04-2011, 11:01 AM   #44
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I think that the design you had before this one was better. This one is good, but the other design had a stronger appearance. This design looks a little more clumsy.
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Old 18-04-2011, 12:57 PM   #45
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umm about post 39 dont be so generous with purples, do away with it from the bottom half of the image ,transiton with violets babby pinks and scarlets wud be much better.

you know you could name her V.i.o.l.e.t in abbreviation.

also you could show her floating on a neon disc while her minions are bowing down to her.

and do throw in more visible cog wheels please and yes with extra cheese.
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