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Old 11-10-2007, 12:21 PM   #1
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Nude girl

Hello to all! This is my first post on the forum

I have started to model a girl, and i am thinking of moving to texturing soon after i tweak her a little.
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Old 11-10-2007, 02:45 PM   #2
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Hy! The overall shape of the model is not bad.I think you shoud concetrate more on the head for now, try to get more accurate likeness to a woman.You need to work more on the forehead(too big) ,the eyes (the eyelids are not there yet,the form could be also improved), the mouth(too sharp-the corners), the part under the nostrils where the nose joins the head is not good(too sharp).The ears should be lowered down a bit ,alligned with the corner of the eye.I'm also studying now human forms so i'm not an expert but this is what i think.Keep posting!
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Old 13-10-2007, 06:10 AM   #3
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aside from what vlad_z said I think the shoulders are a bit too high and the breasts are rather small.
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Old 13-10-2007, 06:21 PM   #4
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aside from what vlad_z said I think the shoulders are a bit too high and the breasts are rather small.
maybe also a little too far apart?
try defining her rib cage a little more?

and i also agree with vlad_z

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Old 14-10-2007, 02:33 PM   #5
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well, the shoulders seem quite fine to me, but for some help as for the anatomy you might check: http://www.female-anatomy-for-artist.com

cheers!
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Old 16-10-2007, 12:21 PM   #6
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Looking good!

There are women with this sort of shape I guess. Did you have a particular role in mind for this model?

Personally, I'd scale the central part of the upper body (a vertical strip between the breasts from navel to neck) to make it more narrow and then move the outer part of upper body inwards to match up.

That'd narrow the shoulders and waist a little and bring the breasts closer together.

Or perhaps make the breasts a little bigger to balance the upper and lower body.

Are you modelling from a photographic reference?
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Old 17-10-2007, 02:56 PM   #7
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Thanx to all for your suggestions. I will consider them when i will resume working on this one.

Yes, i have modelled from reference.
Here they are.


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