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Old 01-10-2007, 03:58 AM   #1
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Talking new character for short




hi all....this is the kid version of a character i previously posted that is in my animated short. i took a quick screen grab to show you guys real quick. im pretty happy with the model id say im 90% done. any suggestions?
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Old 01-10-2007, 05:14 AM   #2
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Thats a nice looking model you got going on there!

My only suggestions would be a little broad creasing where the shirt meets the shorts and the shorts meet the legs. And mabye a little more definition in the forearms. Judging by the spec from your render, they look pretty linear.

Looks awsome so far though, keep it going.
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Old 01-10-2007, 03:09 PM   #3
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Oh man...a cartoon version of a new and hip Lord Voldermont.
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Old 01-10-2007, 07:33 PM   #4
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who is Lord Voldermont? thanks for your input Clanki, i didnt even notice how linear the arms are, im gonna fix that for real, thanks.....
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I take it you never watched any of the Harry Potter movies. Your character's face looks like Lord Voldermont.
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sorry man, saw the first one, didnt really like it, never watched another one. im not judging or anything
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Cool

here is an update with wireframes




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