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Old 04-12-2009, 07:33 AM   #1
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Old 04-12-2009, 10:20 AM   #2
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This is my 30 min sketch.
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Old 04-12-2009, 10:40 AM   #3
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Very nice silhouette concept I suppose there's no game competition logo, like in the sculpting challenges? I was just moment ago looking for it...
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Old 04-12-2009, 11:14 AM   #4
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like Jerico said, silhouette is looking really cool I want to see more.
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Old 04-12-2009, 08:42 PM   #5
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I did n't found any competition logo too

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Old 04-12-2009, 09:00 PM   #6
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Just my opinion, but I prefered the simplicity of the original sketch. A lot of the best characters have a very simple and obvious role and I think your second sketch over-complicates things
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Old 04-12-2009, 10:01 PM   #7
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i liked the first sketch better because it had a more sinister look, the second sketch is fine though cause its showin off details . maybe you could make his hood cover his face a little more? it would make him look more intimidating
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Old 05-12-2009, 03:18 AM   #8
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Very nice concept! Interested to see it modeled. I'll be watching
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Old 05-12-2009, 05:41 AM   #9
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Looks interesting!
I guess you are big fan of “S.T.A.L.K.E.R”!!! If not here are some pictires that could help you:
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Old 05-12-2009, 07:48 AM   #10
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yeah I guess the first sketch was more WILD!
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Thanks for the good advices. I will alter my second sketch.
Kraken, yes i am fan of S.T.A.L.K.E.R, thanks for pics!
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I agree, the silhouette was more interesting than the second piece of concept. I think it's because the silhouette left so much to the imagination.

On further note, I feel like your character needs something to make him feel more exotic. Right now, I feel like this character would fit into any number of video games, he could play a theif, or a soldier in a ww2 game, or a modern special agent, etc. My point is, he just doesn't feel like an end of the world survivor.

I'm not sure where you should go from here. I think more concept is needed. Try to juice up the feel to him. Nice work, keep it up!
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Old 05-12-2009, 06:51 PM   #13
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Thanks SnappedStrings, great advice!
Here is my new concept! I tried to consider all advices. Now he is wild and sinister and i hope he look like an end of the world survivor .
But now i have no idea how to do this in 3D, because there are a lot of staff and eqipment .
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this concept is definitely better, it has way more personality than the other one. also,
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My point is, he just doesn't feel like an end of the world survivor.
Since the end of the world hasn't happened yet, and nobody knows what the culture that develops out of it would actually be like, you cant say it doesn't "feel" like an end of the world survivor; it may not feel like your vision of an end of the world survivor, but it feels like FBIOS's vision.
keep workin on it man, cant wait for updates!
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Last concept is rocking dude...
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