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Old 10-01-2010, 12:28 PM   #31
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You should make the eyelids a little thicker and also lower the upper eyelid more.
Good start, keep it up
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Old 10-01-2010, 01:16 PM   #32
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looking real nice! loving the detail of the hair, and the face has a lot of character. My only suggestion so far would be to maybe rotate out the ears just a smidge, they seem veery flat against the side of the head at the moment
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Old 10-01-2010, 04:34 PM   #33
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Very nice progress so far.The sculpt is matching up to the concept amazingly.
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Old 13-01-2010, 06:09 AM   #34
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Ihazard - This material was just matcap gray. I rendered it to best so it gave a very refined look. And thanks!

Kirgan - Thank you, and I’ve adjusted them, hopefully to your liking ^_^

L3XICON - Thank you much! I’ve adjusted the ears, let me know if they look better

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Thanks so much for the support everyone! <3 I refined the collar so it’s not so blobby and more hard surface, rotated the ears, and adjusted her eyelids. I’ve also added her soft clothing, gloves, and some of her accessories. Doing a whole lot more tonight so the next update will be HUGE!




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Old 13-01-2010, 06:21 AM   #35
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ooooo i like the designs on her boobs this is coming along really nicely. one crit would be........POST MORE!
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Old 13-01-2010, 11:26 AM   #36
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yeah, coming along nicely. Really liking her figure, you might want to take another look on the navel it's looking kinna funny keep rocking it girl.
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Old 13-01-2010, 01:25 PM   #37
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Aye! More posts!

She's looking pretty darn hot, but maybe a bit too futuristic?
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Old 13-01-2010, 04:30 PM   #38
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xxxcubanxxx - I agree :P I have many little tweaks, I shall add that to the list! And thank you

Jerico - Thanks! Hmm, is there a specified year that the bomb dropped? I know it takes place 30 years later, but could that be in present day? And looking at the entries in the previous game art challenge, some of those look a bit in the future as well, most of them do actually. She has things that run as steam punk but she wants to look good too ^_^ I don't understand why most people are making their characters look like fashion went back in time. I know that if a bomb dropped today, we would not dress in early 1900's style clothing. :P

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Old 13-01-2010, 08:10 PM   #39
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it's conventional to dress your steampunk characters in late 19th/early 20th century inspired fashions. No idea why.


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her cheekbones are upsetting me slightly, they definitely need smoothing off.
Otherwise im quite interested.

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It's conventional to dress your characters in that late 1800's type of dress because that is the dress that was used when Steam power was at its peak. For some reason if technology doesn't change then neither do clothing styles :P

I agree with poop about the belly button. And I think the style of clothing you have there is fine, perhaps a bit too risky for what I would consider SteamPunk. But who says we can't all see SteamPunk differently
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I like it, nice and clean, and the hair is looking good too u should be proud
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Thanks everyone for the crits ^_^

I have a twist with steam punk, which defined on dictionary.com is: a genre of science fiction set in Victorian times when steam was the main source of machine power; also written steam-punk.

But it was not clear for the challenge that the style of clothing had to follow strict Victorian times. I plan to give her the traditional colours and technology with hints of the old elegant style built in, but looking at the entries for the last competition (Army of One), I just don't understand how it follows in regards to the time period. Things will definitely run on something other than electricity, but to follow the theme of the storyline, updating the looks seemed what it was asking for. Not trying to argue XD that's just how I perceived it.

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Old 13-01-2010, 09:13 PM   #43
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Thanks everyone for the crits ^_^

I have her a twist with steam punk, which defined on dictionary.com is: a genre of science fiction set in Victorian times when steam was the main source of machine power; also written steam-punk.

But it was not clear for the challenge that the style of clothing had to follow strict Victorian times. I plan to give her the traditional colours and technology with hints of the old elegant style built in, but looking at the entries for the last competition (Army of One), I just don't understand how it follows in regards to the time period. Things will definitely run on something other than electricity, but to follow the theme of the storyline, updating the looks seemed what it was asking for. Not trying to argue XD that's just how I perceived it.

Next post will be an update guys
i agree thats what i thought too. like its the story we have to follow to resort to steam
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She is looking sweet. The tubes connected to her lower chest cavity will affect her skin somehow because it looks to clean ( I know is still early ). I expect to see the skin bulging around the pipe because of the heat and connectors. Is a very good looking model with great detail.
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I've got an idea re: the clothes.

don't worry about it

seriously though - it looks like it fits the theme to me. That collar thing will be classic steampunk if it's lined with red velvet - it could maybe do with a bit of a chestpiece like on a jules verne style deep sea diver helmet or something but you're well within the confines of the genre as it is.


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furthermore.

the brief doesn't state pure steam punk, it talks about improvised tech 30 years after the bomb drops. Like you say, we don't know when the bomb dropped.
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