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Old 13-01-2010, 09:53 PM   #46
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buzz001 - I was planning to do that, I'd think it'd get a bit swollen from something like that x.x And thank you very much!

poopipe - Thanks a lot The velvet would be an amazing touch I'd never think about. And yes, thank you for the confirmation and help!

What do you guys think of this? I think it would fit the general theme a bit better, she would def have more class as well haha ^__^ (Thanks for the find mister)

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Old 13-01-2010, 10:26 PM   #47
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ooooyeah, this outfit would be a killer! x]
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Old 14-01-2010, 06:49 AM   #48
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armians - Thank youu XP

I did a quick paint over of what I can modify her outfit to be (and with a lot more detail than the concept shows). I've rotated the pipes on her chest to face up, as if I were here, I wouldn't want smoke by my face. The chest/stomach area can be closed (but I don't think that's nearly as sexy), but I like that you can see where the pipes enter her chest and you will see that it's swollen. Please let me know what you guys think. Thank you for the support again! ^____^

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Old 14-01-2010, 11:26 AM   #49
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I like the costume, ...I think a open stomach will look better
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Old 15-01-2010, 07:23 PM   #50
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Go with the picture. The outfit will fit right up your alley with this model, since your original already has a high collar.
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Old 16-01-2010, 07:13 PM   #51
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That last sketch looks awesome. I think you're well within the bounds of steampunk, so, make it happen, I'm looking forward to seeing it.
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Old 19-01-2010, 11:27 AM   #52
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Moridin - Agreed. And thanks

buzz001 - Added a collar. Hope you like it

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Hey guys! It's been a few days, haven't slept yet today but making good progress. Here is her completed body, minus the back gear. Here are some detail shots as well. Time for bed!




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Old 19-01-2010, 11:55 AM   #53
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Really great work! I love all the little details you put on her.

I might add, that her arms seems to be a little bit short.
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Old 19-01-2010, 12:27 PM   #54
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it's an amazing work. Detailing is great keep it up.
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Old 19-01-2010, 08:37 PM   #55
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Sculpt looks really nice. I like the logo on the dog tag. Really nice detailing in the gloves and and around the opening in the front of her outfit. I think you're missing the bones in the ankle?

I'll second the motion that the arms look a bit short, but I think its just an illusion cause by the height of the heels, making the legs look really long.
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Old 19-01-2010, 11:07 PM   #56
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Looking good well done. U going to do the low Res now?
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Old 19-01-2010, 11:58 PM   #57
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This is looking good bro. Love the gear cut-out in the shoes nice touch.
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Old 20-01-2010, 12:04 AM   #58
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very nice, really like the details. Only thing you could fix IMO is the folds on the cr0tch area because they look kind of weird other than that looks good, keep it up.
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Old 20-01-2010, 12:22 AM   #59
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Thank you soo much for the support guys, again. ^__^ I'm making a lot of adjustments and starting her other gear at this very moment.

Cordero - Thank you and I've adjusted her arms, next update!

bibhuti - Thank you much!

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- Ah, adding in those ankles :P And adjusting those arms as well. Thank you

Tarik2d - Thanks! And I'll be retopoing once the rest of her gear is done (almost done)

buzz001 - Glad you like it! And by the way, I am no bro


xxxcubanxxx - Thanks! And I agree, I'll be fixing that for next update ^__^
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Old 20-01-2010, 12:26 AM   #60
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hmmm, any chance of showcasing your character's outfit???

see this is what you get for posting this pics.
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