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Old 17-01-2010, 07:15 PM   #16
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Ankles are looking a little thick in the front view. Looks like you've got most of the outfit down pretty close to your sketch. Face is feeling a bit masculine, but its hard to say from the last couple images.
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Old 17-01-2010, 09:51 PM   #17
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thanks for the comments! the view is a bit distorting the ankels I think but I will have a look again. I have some troubles removing the masculine lines out of the face, been using the smooth a lot but I will have to look at the proportions again I think...
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Old 17-01-2010, 09:58 PM   #18
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Try making the nose smaller that might help
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Old 25-01-2010, 07:28 PM   #19
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update... I have been fuzzling with the hair for ages and it will still not hold for a close up. Not even close...
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