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Old 14-03-2017, 11:00 PM   #1
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wondering what is wrong with my work? opinions please

hello.. i've recently made new design and as always here i get message with refusing to submit to galleries ..
i never complained before but this one i think it is good enough and the same level as the others..
i am just wondering what is so bad here? maybe something i didn't see so i will correct
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Old 20-03-2017, 01:18 AM   #2
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dont worry abou what wrong with your work let the client judge you on your work . just tyou look at trying to improve all the time . that happens if client want changes or style they are keen on
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Old 23-03-2017, 09:39 AM   #3
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I'm not entirely sure, but I think..
the problem is that the car does not make a lot of sense.

for instance, why do the headlights have teeth?
or why do the back side windows have that weird pattern?

don't get me wrong, I think this is one of your best projects, model, textures and render look pretty good. The design itself could use more attention though.
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Old 23-03-2017, 09:57 AM   #4
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Haha thanks bro)) I know the stuff I made are crazy I don't deny nothing does make sense lol... But still many works don't make sense as well, in general, tried to do cool materials and stuff not usual..
Anyways I moved on,

Today I got a message from 3Dtotal they said that my work have been selected to digital magazine but I don't know which one yet... Soon will know)))
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the render which i have uploaded looks like you have used no global illumination .what render engine did you use for the following as the bouced lighting doesnt seem to be set up and are e you using mental ray or the scanline render. the wood texuture seems to have bump map but not a specular map whiich can make light relfelct off material more realistic. i would also take down the setting of the bump texture on the wood . I would concentrate on the area of the table rather than the full room as the rooms empty .
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i will provide a post on bounced lighting also look into the texture maps
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article on bouced light and how objects take light from other objects around

https://knowledge.autodesk.com/suppo...161BA-htm.html
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hello.. i've recently made new design and as always here i get message with refusing to submit to galleries ..
i never complained before but this one i think it is good enough and the same level as the others..
i am just wondering what is so bad here? maybe something i didn't see so i will correct
thank you
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here it is
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/ORJJk
I realy love the car, is awesom. The only thing I can't understand it the background. You have probably a good reason for the BK but anyway
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Haha thanks bro)) I know the stuff I made are crazy I don't deny nothing does make sense lol... But still many works don't make sense as well, in general, tried to do cool materials and stuff not usual..
Anyways I moved on,

Today I got a message from 3Dtotal they said that my work have been selected to digital magazine but I don't know which one yet... Soon will know)))
sounds exciting
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Old 23-03-2017, 06:02 PM   #11
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Thanks all for comments.. I will replay after returning home cuz I'm on trip now..
About bk I changed it there is a new render in my artstation
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