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Old 17-03-2009, 03:29 PM   #16
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design is great! good graphic way
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Old 17-03-2009, 07:27 PM   #17
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Hey, this is a pretty slick concept. The legs are definitely too small in the first sketch as you suggested. I vote for the rifle, scouts don't use shotguns, they make too much noise. I like what you've done with the joints in the elbows, with the "track" that looks cool. Nice start with the modeling so far.

You've got a lot of really nice stuff going on in your first sketch, but like Joseph Pomeisl pointed out, the white is drowning it out something fierce. I had to drop it into GIMP and kill the BG to really see it. And you're modeled images are almost too dark. Makes me wonder if it might not be a bad idea to take a look at a quick monitor calibration tool. Would hate to see the details get lost in your final entry.

Excellent start, I'm looking forward to your progress.
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Old 19-03-2009, 08:10 AM   #18
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I really like this design and the fact that you've kept true to the section he's designed for. Speed not open warfare! Great! Perhaps give him a smaller, hand gun with a silencer on.

Looking good, can't wait to see your progress.
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Old 24-03-2009, 12:53 AM   #19
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Ok, moving at a snails pace, but here's an update, running at 8,752 Tris, so I should be able to get some decent work done with the gun. That's next, then Zbr, then Texturing, then BAMF done!

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Old 24-03-2009, 01:20 AM   #20
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This is coming along very nicely. Can't wait to see what you do with it in z-brush.
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