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Old 25-04-2009, 07:46 PM   #46
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miycko: Thanks! I'll try to make it look less red.
Darchand: You're right about the arm. It still looks kinda strange. But it is really hard for me to capture a position during a movement like that. Please feel free to draw on top of my WIP. It'll help a lot!
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Old 25-04-2009, 10:32 PM   #47
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Put the 3d total logo across the right shoulder armor part. It will look better there instead of on the temple of the forehead.
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Old 26-04-2009, 07:07 AM   #48
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Wow, this is starting to look really great, but watch the shape of the arm, I love the way the armor looks. Keep up the good work.
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Old 30-04-2009, 08:12 PM   #49
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Hey there,
I'm sorry... I didn't have the time to go online recently (Job issues... I hope to get a new job soon!).
Here's my updated modeling sheet.
An update on the main picture and response to your comments will follow tomorrow.
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Old 01-05-2009, 06:28 PM   #50
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Thanks for the support Spartan118 and Agent-X.
I'll work on the arm and on the logo, too.

Here's the update I promised to post. I forgot to remove the black placeholder-shapes of the monsters... So don't comment on that please.

Should I make the foreground darker?

What do you think about the glowing eye?
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Old 01-05-2009, 07:18 PM   #51
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Can anybody tell me how to change the name of my thread, so it is no longer "untitled" but "Ahgrat"?
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Old 02-05-2009, 06:29 AM   #52
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Can anybody tell me how to change the name of my thread, so it is no longer "untitled" but "Ahgrat"?
Edit your first post (change title).
I'm net specialist neither in 2D nor 3D, but I like glowing eye. You work is still missing something, but i can't tell what, I'll ask my brother in law, he is better in 2D
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Old 02-05-2009, 07:31 AM   #53
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Well, I tried to... but it didn't change the main title. I think I oversaw something?
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Old 02-05-2009, 08:18 AM   #54
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If you wanna change the title of your page you have to PM Big ToE and ask him to change it for you.

I like the glowing eye, make it a bit more red with some whit at the centre. Cool looking demons.
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I looked at your picture one more time and I think I know what's wrong, your character is flying, and axe is moving. Axe has very clear motion blur and character doesn't have motionblur at all, That creates unnatural look.
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Augis: The axe doesn't have a motion blur either... it's the flames that are flickering with the motion... like the hair is floating around his head... same thing.

Btw. small update:
changed the colour of the hand and the neck and worked on the monsters and also on the mast in the midground.
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look good now Maybe these where colours, that's my armateur opinion anyways
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Old 03-05-2009, 07:36 PM   #59
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2md update for today:
worked on the smoke and blood layers... I'm not satisfied with the blood on the axe... any suggestions on how I can improve that?
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You could try making the blood a bit more transparent and add some more on the axe, like you have on the top left corner of your image.

That's a really cool smoke effect, it looks absolutely awesome.
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