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Old 23-03-2011, 12:11 PM   #1
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Old 23-03-2011, 04:43 PM   #2
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Old 23-03-2011, 07:48 PM   #3
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Nice - digging the punk/hipster kinda look that the girls got goin on - gives her some real character. Only thing i'd suggest with the composition is possibly moving her up or cropping the top - so as to bring her eyeline to the top third of the composition - seems a little too centered at the moment - ie too much white space on the top in my opinion. Keep up the good work man, looking forward to seeing it colored up.
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Old 24-03-2011, 07:12 PM   #4
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great sketch! really like your line-art especially her hands are looking really nice
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Old 25-03-2011, 06:06 AM   #5
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Blender-Man, Cheers.

atahan_zugul, Thanks man, I see what you’re saying about the composition
Once I get the girl painted up I'll play around with her position.
I'm still thinking about ideas for what's in the background.

migroe, Thanks.

The rough idea for the back story to this image is.
It's some far off time in the future something has happened to the sun.
The planet is almost in total darkness.
This has resulted in the creatures of the dark preying on the weak and vulnerable.
But there is one hope left, AtomHawk, the girl with the mysterious power to bring light.

Here's the latest on the image, wanted to play around with her eyes, to give her a slightly strange, odd look.
Not sure, but I'll live with it a while and see how it looks.
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Old 28-03-2011, 06:40 AM   #6
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Sorry not a big update, pushed for time
Worked in her hair and I'm just about to start painting in the helmet.
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Old 28-03-2011, 07:54 AM   #7
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Some cool paint work going.
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Old 28-03-2011, 10:42 AM   #8
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Nice work man - its really coming along. Your color palette is looking quite saturated even in the shadows, is this the direction you heading in? Also i keep fluctuating between her eyes and the light coming from her hands - maybe competing focal points - or this where you were looking to go with the piece. Keep it up man, look forward to seeing where you take it next.
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Old 28-03-2011, 03:07 PM   #9
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Amazing Eyes!
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Old 28-03-2011, 08:23 PM   #10
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Amazing Eyes and hair ! Right eye for me its better.
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Yeah, I agree with Blender, the black part of the left eye is way too big.
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Old 29-03-2011, 06:37 AM   #12
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DaddyDoom Thanks mate.

atahan_zugul Great feedback, Not sure yet about the strength of the colour palette. I'm going to push it along as it is and I can always pull the colours down a bit later. You could be right about the competing focal point, once I get the glowing light in I'll have to make a decision about that one.

MemoNick Blender-Man MemoNick thanks guys, yeah I'm still not sure about the eye's, could be the left is just a bit too big.

Trying to get as much done as time will allow, hope I can make the deadline!
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awesome! love the colours, the style, the texturing
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Looks great, keep it up !
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Thanks guys
I'm really enjoying Woking on this image, pushed for time with other commitments but will do all I can to get her finished in time!!
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