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Old 17-04-2015, 10:56 PM   #1
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Cybernetic Diorama - Uni Assignment Feedback

Hey, I am a Staffordshire University, UK, student looking for some feedback please to use as evidence in my assignment submission - Thanks guys!

The High and Low Poly.



The Unwrap and the Normal Map which I projected onto the low poly using the projection modifier in 3DMax.



A side by side comparison of the Low and High Poly models, now with the Normal applied to the Low Poly.



The Albedo and Rougness maps.



A number of presentation screenshots rendered in UE4 using a PBR setup on the materials.







I also put together a little Matinee of the scene, its my first attempt at Matinee and I have since learned that I could have made movement events linear, which would have resulted in a less jerky video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ptwxR6M2GfI

Feedback on lighting, mesh optimisation etc would be really handy - Thanks!
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Old 18-04-2015, 07:22 PM   #2
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Cool Help!

Would really appreciate some feedback if anyone has the time - thanks.
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Old 24-04-2015, 12:26 PM   #3
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hey pretty cool work..one small thing I would say is, maybe use a bit of AO on the objects..coz the book..the cup and the face look a bit like they are floating..some contact occlusion would really help ground the objects a lot better..cheers!!
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